Can someone help edit my essay please :)

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anonymous · Answer

lets see it

anonymous · Answer

uhm where's it?

sup_open~study · Answer

here it is

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so here is my thesisDue to economic inefficiency, lack of use, and global irrelevancy, the penny should be eliminated from U.S. currency

anonymous · Answer

i feel like there's supposed to be a semicolon in one of ur sentences. do u need help w punctuation and grammar  or the actual essay

anonymous · Answer

its really short xD

anonymous · Answer

yeah let yocy help u idk jack dittle

sup_open~study · Answer

lol will I have done a paragraph just need help on the intro

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here is a paragraph I conducted it can be proof read

sup_open~study · Answer

there are some spacing issues lol

anonymous · Answer

so u need something before your paragraph?

sup_open~study · Answer

yes my intro I need more material that goes with my thesis

sup_open~study · Answer

does that make sense?

sup_open~study · Answer

basically my paragraph should cover the points in my  thesis

anonymous · Answer

oh lol okay let me see...uhmm...its about economy, right?

sup_open~study · Answer

yes why the penny should be eliminated

sup_open~study · Answer

do you need some figures?

anonymous · Answer

yes please. I'm good at writing but I just began studying Economy this year at school xD

sup_open~study · Answer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77C47XYm_3c

sup_open~study · Answer

some source info

sup_open~study · Answer

it takes 2.4 cents to make a penny

sup_open~study · Answer

it takes nearly a dime today to buy what a penny bought back in 1950.

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anonymous · Answer

wait this thing isn't letting me copy and paste :/

anonymous · Answer

¿Save or spend? That's a good question ¿what are we doing while producing pennies? ¿are we saving? ¿earning? ¿or actually are we spending? Think about this...
and then you continue ^^

What do you think?

sup_open~study · Answer

We are not saving.

sup_open~study · Answer

Each year the U.S. mint makes more than 13 billion pennies.

sup_open~study · Answer

With the melt value exceeding the economic value the more pennies makes them more worthless

anonymous · Answer

yeah well it all can be explained in the essay's supporting details. Its good to begin an essay with questions because you answer them in it. So it makes the essay have sense.

sup_open~study · Answer

okay that supports the economic inefficiency part of the essay

anonymous · Answer

yep

sup_open~study · Answer

alright now lack of use

sup_open~study · Answer

More pennies are thrown away than spent

anonymous · Answer

just wondering...should I be writing this somewhere? Cuz I'm not...

sup_open~study · Answer

sorry computer died its okay just trying to get ideas flowed

anonymous · Answer

oh okay ^^ Ugh I'll fall asleep in any sec...

sup_open~study · Answer

hahaha  I got ya

anonymous · Answer

xD hehe its late thats all

sup_open~study · Answer

hello