Question

PLEASE help me fix my essay! It's attached.

Answer 1

i don't see it

Answer 2

the prompt is

Answer 3

fix the grammar then you should be good to go :)

Answer 4

I cannot submit it here with text bc my teacher would think I plagerized it

Answer 5

this is the first draft

Answer 6

ohh yeah i know what you mean... do you have any other drafts of it done or no?

Answer 7

no I don't :/ I needed to turn this in today but I can't turn it bc it sucks. It's 200 points

Answer 8

y can't u send it in right now

Answer 9

I can, I just don't want to get a bad grade. I need help with it first.