It hurts that ur gone & out of my life/I was stupid to think we were going to be together till the very last night/love failed & nothing else prevailed/my heart is dead & cannot be fed/u told me u loved me & cared/but ur true character was shown else where/I tried & tried, cried & cried till there was no more/now there's no us,nevermore/love failed & nothing else prevailed/u said I was ur princess & u would never let me go/i cry everyday just to let u know/how I wish I could forget how it felt to be with u/to turn & walk away like if it was just another day/love failed & will not prevail
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what is this for
my English class i had to write a poem that comes from the heart and let a couple people see it and get feedback than share it with my class
well good job i really liked it
thanks..really appreciate it
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