Can someone check my thesis for my feminist critique of the Great Gatsby?

The prompt was to look at the novel from a feminist perspective and offer any insights while also looking at one style element or literary device.

Thesis: The role of the woman in the Roaring Twenties, through the eyes of the man, can be identified by the symbolism and motifs in F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby.

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Can someone check my thesis for my feminist critique of the Great Gatsby?

The prompt was to look at the novel from a feminist perspective and offer any insights while also looking at one style element or literary device.

Thesis: The role of the woman in the Roaring Twenties, through the eyes of the man, can be identified by the symbolism and motifs in F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby.

anonymous · Answer

Now that I look at what I have written so far in my paper, I believe it has more to do with the characterization, or maybe just the motifs (not sure where using the names of the women and the actions of the men would fit)