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OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

My comebacks to blu girl

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

(Verse 1): Pressure on me heart racing my pace is heavy I know im in for a fight I might quit or I might just put up a fight. My respect has been way overdue expect a war let me state and declare no matter how much you roast me I come right back up. I was on the top now im at the bottom aint afraid to admit it but I also ain’t afraid to continue. Came back two months later never was the same don’t think I even want to continue. (Verse 2): Im just going to be real on this track and spit it like it really is. Forget about a comeback I might not even come back after this is ridiculous I can’t even understand a thing your saying it sounds like gibberish seriously what is this “he can't even make rice, but he can't even eat cuz it all comes back up his windpipe.” Yea im the crack and you’re the azz you even look like one its quite fitting you spitting s*** that aint even good. Im calling your bluff your stuff ain’t pellete I never asked for your two cents so quit being a nuisance. Your face makes me puke your rap makes me laugh I can’t even take you seriously the sh** I talk I can back up my cup is full of rage so ill just let it spill all over you feed my fires keep on filling my engine with gasoline. (Verse 3): I can’t understand anything your saying its like jawa language fast and squawky plus squeaky. Id give you a chance but the calculations say any chance you gots narrow shot your arrow at me and missed. Acting like a dike but I look around the room and see only bishes “DULLJACKEL GOT BEAT BY A GIRl” correction I got beat by five girls, you little tikes need to scoot on in your diapers get on your trikes and ride off. Quit acting black you whiter than the walls in in the apartment what you know about rapping from the heart you just came in to this game iv been in it for 5 years. Rap battling for 2 years let me make it clear I might have lost my touch this rap might not be even good could just plain suck as a comeback ill always comeback stronger you cant stop me no one can stop me wont ever take my pride and you certainly wont ever see me quit anytime soon. (Verse 4): I tried to roast you it wouldn’t come out in me couldn’t come out just can’t do it. I should let you win but what would I be if I gave up just aint ready to give it up quite yet. I don’t care what you people call me you say im short but right now im standing taller than ever. Call me worthless, call me horrible, call me terrible ill never give up im not afraid of you and I aint got time for two year olds. Once again I find myself in this slump dropped in a dump cause I just can’t the words towards you that would win me this battle wont come out. This is a K.O I was strong in the beginning and yea you win I got one more verse to go then ill be done. (Verse 5): Back in the day I was king I still am king no matter how much the insults sting I still keep on going. Till no one feels me till it kills me I wont drop a mic and stop putting a rhyme and a verse together. I wont let you haters or these loses mess me up even if im less than great ill still muster up the courage to get right back on the mic and continue rapping. It’s only right that I write till my king comes and raptures me cause he gave me this gift. So excuse me if im using excuses to escape outta battling you but Im done cause this isn’t really worth anything so my heart aint in it anymore. Cause iv been kicked down bruised and beaten more times than I can count but today im letting it all go. This is a K.O just so you know im going back to where I should have been and now all I wanna do is rap about Christ.

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

@arabpride

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

lol dont judge or call me a coward im not a coward

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Blu-Girl

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ahahhaahahahahahahaha @Blu-Girl come look at this

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

lol laugh if you want but its what i was led to make

OpenStudy (anonymous):

im lafing cuz u dint say this wen u was actualy chalenging her XD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

XDXDXDXD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@DullJackel09 these lyrics look pretty good, and I think your song will turn out great!

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Thanks

OpenStudy (anonymous):

LMAOO... wow i'm just laughing cuz i feel as if you're just writing a story as a comeback to me, well it's not gonna work, cuz i'm still fresha than a mo' fo, and I still got the flo that you don't have....

OpenStudy (anonymous):

He has to wait 5 hours just to make a comeback and it's still lame

OpenStudy (anonymous):

omg @bibby and @bloopman look @ this ishhh lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@DullJackeI09 You're welcome :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Squirrels can you believe this jackkk.............

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@baking4lyf

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@nickmifsud1223 @StudyGurl14 @CausticSyndicalist @Candycane @Walkerman15

OpenStudy (anonymous):

And it's funny u say song melodic musician because this is a rap battle :/

OpenStudy (anonymous):

LOL

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Dude, this little boy just don't know when to give up, I swear he gets hit with his own nunchucks, and if i had to ask, he'd say he didn't have a single buck, cuz he's poor as' a fck, and all he does for a living is waddle like a duck, and eat dirt on the back of some guys truck, he ain't even got to dress up, cuz no matter where he goes, people look at him and call him a ho e, so for Halloween all he can do is scare off the crows, and he tries to drink a cup of joe, but as he does he glances at a little baby, he scares him to death, and then he goes to jail for actin so dang crazy, get's tazed, and strung out on a limb, as if he wasn't already to thin, get's murked, and he thinks he's gon get twerked, but he's ain't nothing but bone, how would that even work, he's so nasty that he's mistaken for trash, took to the dump, and gotta dig through the grass, lookin for a way out, but he ain even got as ss, he's so pathetic he listens to jazz, and I'm like get away from me cuz you got trillions of flyin crabs, and you never get a bath, and you smell like decay, man when's the last time you got an x-ray, oh wait you can't cuz you're already that way, man they already have you on display, at walmart, goodwill, and even ebay... you say you get ladies, they just shew you away, they say you're so disturbed, and you chastise them all day, you're thirsty for something you ain' neva bout to have, go back to yo grave, and neva come back, you died there anyway, so why you escaped it's totally beyond meh, you say you are all that, but then why you wearin that mask, so take it off, cuz it looks hideous as crap, you already goofed up so why you smoking that weed, you look like a scumbag, you try to hard, and you never succeed, so no matter what you do, you'll always be lyin in defeat, and you can take that from a rapper like me, first name greastest, lizzy, kizzy, or blu, I'm always goin to be the greatest, I thought that you knew, got my flocabulary by the age of 4, swear my parents ain never heard nuthin like it before, and now that I'm in school i swear i open lots of doors, dull jackel, you are no where near great, and i swear to God, Ima have you sobbin in a cave, you have no home, no friends, no family, you even scare bears, sharks, and honey bees, and even if your spirit comes to haunt me, you'll always be banished, and you better fuken flee, cuz i don't take shizz and you can take it from me, that's just how i roll, Savannah Georgia Mafia, born and raised, yeah I ain goin no where, that's where I stay, man, so don't think you can try to mess with me, i'll have you stutterin and beggin please, let me go, i swear I'll let you be, but man you ain' know. I'm a freaken OG, I live life large, and I live it as I please, My raps are my life, I can do 'em all day, freestylin daily, It's the only way, Dulljackel I could beat you in 0.2 seconds, dude I swear you'll never learn you're lesson, but since you're already dead, guess you'll suffer for life, getting beaten and destroyed, continuous sacrifice, man you ain't got no hope, like I said you already died, U a hopeless nikka, I don't even know if you were black or white, for all i know you could me some man made di ke. So when you really think you gon' try me, cuz to be honest, it don't matter, cuz I'ma always be tryin yo life, dead or alive! ------------- take that @Dulljackel09 I swear I could rap all night but i had to stop for now, cuz u ain't even a bit of a challenge to me

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Lyrae how u like my rap? I freaken destroyed him, didn't I? @Yuba @melodicmusican5 @CausticSyndicalist @Candycane @StudyGurl14 @Squirrels @WWWHHHAAATTT? @Owlfred

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yea @Blu-Girl you destroyed him lol

OpenStudy (causticsyndicalist):

I didn't know Owlfred was into this kind of thing xP But yeah I like it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yea idk I just tagged whoever

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks you guys! (:

OpenStudy (causticsyndicalist):

No problem :D

OpenStudy (lyrae):

Steamroller @blue-girl lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

haha thanks Lyrae :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This reminds me of regular show where mordecai and rigby try to teach pops to rap, and all he wants to do is sing poetry, and I'm sorry if I've offended anyone, but clearly this is a RAP battle, not a poetry club.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

What is wrong with this dude.... Do y'all really call that cyber bullying.... It's a freaking rap

OpenStudy (anonymous):

he's so stupid He said maybe I'm an FBI agent

OpenStudy (anonymous):

xD

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Well since your blind i guess i will have to diss you

OpenStudy (anonymous):

shi t u the one blind cuz u got your hoodie coverin your face

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Blu girl im getting tired of this Bs just leave me alone and ill leave you alone

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Bye.... never ask me to battle you ever again then

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

lol right now im going through some stuff i dont need this right now maybe ill battle you later

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

I just aint feeling it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yea we can always do poetry instead, wasn't trying to be mean, but you have to understand it was a battle

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

I know

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Is it true you wanna rap about Christ, cuz i can do that instead

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Yes it is I rap about Christ pretty much 24/7 he gave me this gift so id rather rap for him

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Understandable....... Yeah I listen to MikeBone they are not necessarily Christian rappers, but they still represent Jesus, and include him in their raps

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

If you want to see any of my raps just let me know

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I would

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

(Verse 1): Let me tell you something y’all when you hit the top its hard to see the real treasure your own soul, for me it aint about being number one or hitting stardom. I would rather be selfless than selfish with a million dollars I would rather be real than a fake and take people down the wrong road. My identity is in Christ a honest person than the hottest hit so even when I fall I can call on the real God of all rather be original and individual. (Chorus x2): I don’t wanna hit the top just to lose my own soul, don’t wanna have all these fans and lose my soul, I don’t wanna lose my soul so all eyes on the Christ, all eyes off me spotlight on him and the lights off me I don’t wanna have a million dollars and lose my soul. (Verse 2): Yo I might not act so Christian but that don’t mean I aint one cause it’s not a religion it’s a relationship. It’s a walk more than just lip service and a talk your real or not your for him or you’re against him . The cross is more than a symbol its forgiveness he took the blame for me so I will not be ashamed to proclaim his name is my music. (Chorus x2): I don’t wanna hit the top just to lose my own soul, don’t wanna have all these fans and lose my soul, I don’t wanna lose my soul all eyes on the Christ, all eyes off me spotlight on him and the lights off me I don’t wanna have a million dollars and lose my soul.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Lol what's with the pattern, You got 4 medals , i got 2, you got 4, i got 2, you get 4, i get two, lol... ok I'm lookin , 1 sec

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Gave me reason: (Verse 1): Oh how the tears poured like rain on the darkest of days how can I say that you are truly forgiven when all I feel is a new kind of disgust. Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, bones to bones we clashed and fought I warred till I couldn’t fight anymore. Then the ground caved in and swallowed me whole like Sheol and destroyed me inside and out you were my tormenter and this was my torment it seemed for a eternity. (Chorus x2): God gave me reason to let it all go to clean my soul and wash this poison off of me, he gave me reason to continue living and breathing, you only gave me reasons to off myself and breathe again. (Verse 2): All the lies and truths you denied the deep regret that you left behind the respect your denied me that I deserved you openly wounded me his voice healed me he said so clearly. “I loved you even when all you gave me was hate I loved you when all you did was hurt me.” “Even when you tossed me like garbage spit on me and hit me bruised and beat me I loved you.” If that’s not love I don’t know what is so I surrendered and right now his voice is the only one I want to hear. (Chorus x2): God gave me reason to let it all go to clean my soul and wash this poison off of me, he gave me reason to continue living and breathing, you only gave me reasons to off myself and breathe again.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so what's the title?

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

Whats the title for what?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

you're song silly goose

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

The first one is Lose my soul the second one is Gave me Reason

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok, it's good, just never quit making songs

OpenStudy (dulljackel09):

LOl those are all my raps and i dont intend to quit

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh ok

OpenStudy (anonymous):

here's number 2 teddy @Teddyiswatshecallsme

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