Question

here is a poem I wrote

our love life
we loved each other so much
that I gave up on you
I don't know why
but I knew that you were trouble
and I heart knew that
but I didn't listen to my heart
now look at me
heart broken for ever

Answer 1

@Destinycholie

Answer 2

i love it explanes so much right now

Answer 3

hey read your messgaes

Answer 4

i understand what you r going through

Answer 5

i wish he did

Answer 6

boys just don't know a thing what we go through

Answer 7

@Marco,Phillip see what you did to her

Answer 8

oh god you tagged him... sigh....

Answer 9

sorry it had to be done now he will know what he has done to you . you r not your self anymore

Answer 10

he hasn't done anything to me.. i am just upset... thats all.... its nothing new. i just hide it a lot more.

Answer 11

but u cant hide it from me i can see right through you

Answer 12

*sigh*

Answer 13

okay lets change this subject okay lets talk about.............................................................................................................................................................................. what do you wan to talk about

Answer 14

i found you on google +

Answer 15

did you?

Answer 16

yes u r wearing a jean vest

Answer 17

no not me lol

Answer 18

i have a picture with words it says " you are my favorite distraction"

Answer 19

okay i will look for that

Answer 20

lol

Answer 21

found you and read your messages

Answer 22

YAY!!! it says you are restriced though

Answer 23

i know i have the change a setting

Answer 24

an did my message make you feel better or worst

Answer 25

oh i love it i don't think he will lol

Answer 26

i got a plan

Answer 27

you can do what you want, i give up with trying... its pointless... he doesn't want it to happen

Answer 28

-.- u gurlz,just don't get boys,

Answer 29

all are different you can't just know guys by understanding one of them

Answer 30

nope but u can observe them like they r wild misunderstood creatures jajaja

Answer 31

@Clalgee

Answer 32

Great poem! It's short and very sweet. I loved how you ended the poem with, "Heart broken forever". It gives the reader an illusion that the person described in the poem is suffering very deeply, leaving the reader sad. Great work! :)

Answer 33

thank u