Thesis Statement: Advertising is an effective way to promote products to teenagers because it makes teens and it also encourages us to go back to the product

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Thesis Statement: Advertising is an effective way to promote products to teenagers because it makes teens  and it also encourages us  to go back to the product

anonymous · Answer

i just need to fill in Advertising is an effective way to promote products to teenagers because it makes teens   what?

anonymous · Answer

@kyley_bear @samson245

anonymous · Answer

desire? I don't know, I need to know what you are working on exactly

anonymous · Answer

and also for a thesis statement could i use purswasive words

anonymous · Answer

I mean I guess u could use whatever words as long as they fit

anonymous · Answer

Yes, if you choose the right persuasive word, then you could us it in the thesis statement.

anonymous · Answer

i think she's talking about as advertisements like smoking,etc.

anonymous · Answer

was i right?