Question

Can anyone please edit this for me. Its really important.

Thanks!

Answer 1

@aum @Anikate @ashhhrodriguez @brijackson6 @ComputerNerd @dakari22

Answer 2

Well it looks good to me, although English isn't my best class this year. but if its a matter of losing points due to lack of punctuation or grammar, I don't think you have much to worry about. I didn't specifically see any run on sentences, so I think you did alright .

Answer 3

Thanks!

Answer 4

Yup, I hope you do alright!