Question

hey guys can you help edit and finish plzzzz...

Answer 1

@jim_thompson5910 @uri

Answer 2

@AngelWilliams16 @ayyookyndall @alyssa_michelle1996 @alexisp1 @Joel_the_boss @Jaynator495 @jackoo @love10129151 @love10129151 @Lincia @laughoutloud @bibby @Blu-Girl @BrAnDoN_AAS @biologyinquirer @Walkerman15 @WWWHHHAAATTT?

Answer 3

@brAnDon_AAS Haha, I know. So common {sigh}

Answer 4

And um, I love editing, but ughhh this. Lots of grammar mistakes, terrible sense of tense, and, the most terrible part, large letters. Use Times New Roman or Arial.

Answer 5

Oh, I just realised you're in ninth grade. Sorry @acrg81199 you're still in the learning stages. I'm editing this as best I can right now. Sorry for being harsh.

Answer 6

im from venezuela... ik my english sucks but im doing my best :( But plz help me

Answer 7

Your English does not suck at all:) I would love to help but I am very busy myself :/ I hope you do very well!

Answer 8

Your English is amazing. I was only referencing the grade you're in because my sister is also in grade nine, and it is how she writes, and she's been speaking English since she could talk. I don't have much time right now, but I'll do as much as I can. I'm at work, but I'll try to finish editing this..

Answer 9

Sorry I couldn't finish. And @BrAnDoN_AAS this isn't really a love story. It's mostly about a girl looking for her father. I didn't get to finish this though.

Answer 10

thank you so much!!!!!!!! @ManImStumped

Answer 11

Do you still need help editing this? Message me if you do :)