100 words Essay on If I were a magician... Ideas please.

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cicilybailey14 · Answer

If I was a magician I would make all my enemies disappear. And I would give flowers to the homeless magically. and I would tryout for my schools talent show I would even try out for Americas got talent in hopes of being the next Collins Key.

anonymous · Answer

Cicily, you cannot start sentences with "and". Also, your sentences are not complete sentences, and more than likely, Varun's essay needs to be in complete sentences.

Here is the edited, and proper version of what Cicily wrote.

If I was a magician I would invite all my nemesis' to a magic show, giving them front row seats. During the performance, I would ask them to volunteer in a magic trick, where I will make them disappear. After the magic show, I would walk the streets, giving flowers to the homeless, making them appear from my hat, or from up my sleeve. I would tryout for my schools talent show, using my newfound magical skills to woo them. I would even try out for America's Got Talent in hopes of being the next Collins Key.

anonymous · Answer

think about wat a magician is wat they do how they act then write aboout the things u would do as one