Question

who wants to see my poem
Its for thanksgiving

Thank you for giving us the food we eat and giving us a bed to sleep may god watch upon you and give a sweet treat :) if you are kind and wise god will pick you to lead his people to land and they will thank you and give you a hand you will be a great leader and never give up follow your dreams say god and never forget me cause im right here please medal if you like

Answer 1

I really like ! :)

Answer 2

I really liked your poem but is the poem going to be formated correctly. Right now, your poem is formated like a paragraph. You should probably form it like a poem. Example:

Thank you for giving us the food we eat
and giving us a bed to sleep
may god watch upon you
and give a sweet treat...

But do you get what I mean?

Answer 3

Thanks, @quickstudent

Answer 4

Your welcome @maddie91101 .

Answer 5

Some people just have to cause drama haha I love this poem, good job :) <3

Answer 6

love it

Answer 7

thank you

Answer 8

A appreciate it @thecommonersrep

Answer 9

cute!

Answer 10

thank you @Kaylaprincess