Question

Is this couplet poem good is there anything i need to change? medals will be given

Answer 1

Snow and Ice everywhere
The bears are sleeping in their lair
The bare trees lose their leaves
To the cold autumn breeze
The fire offers little warmth
Yet we still huddle around the hearth
The owls sing throughout the night
But not even they can cure our plight
We watch the stars as the sun goes down
Only to have the clouds give us frowns
Winter is here and here to stay
Will we be able to keep the cold at bay?

Answer 2

@savvysarus

Answer 3

This is literally AMAZING wow I love poems like this!! I would say it's close to perfection, but if I could mention only one thing it would be that "But not even they can cure our plight" Plight...sounds a bit funny since the rest of the poem flows so nicely before that word...you don't need to change it though!

Answer 4

Thanks I am hoping for an A in the class so i need this to be perfect.

Answer 5

I think that the poem is absolutely beautiful and i don't think that anything needs to be change at all.

Answer 6

It is worth a lot of points.

Answer 7

Thx guys

Answer 8

your are very welcome! :)

Answer 9

I wish you could legit publish it that's how much I like it, and I'm not just saying this to be nice :)

Answer 10

hi

Answer 11

hi

Answer 12

@Crissy15 @c

Answer 13

medal me

Answer 14

wow,nice I love the rhyming parts,great job!