Question

Is this couplet poem good is there anything i need to change? medals will be given

Answer 1

Snow and Ice everywhere
The bears are sleeping in their lair
The bare trees lose their leaves
To the cold autumn breeze
The fire offers little warmth
Yet we still huddle around the hearth
The owls sing throughout the night
But not even they can cure our plight
We watch the stars as the sun goes down
Only to have the clouds give us frowns
Winter is here and here to stay
Will we be able to keep the cold at bay?

Answer 2

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Answer 3

I think it good but where you said The fire offers little warmth
Yet we still huddle around the hearth I would use a different word instead of Yet

Answer 4

no its absalutly goooooooodddd!!!!!

Answer 5

i mean very goood like it very much!!

Answer 6

Which word would be good to change out with yet

Answer 7

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Answer 8

Thx @danburns123

Answer 9

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Answer 10

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Answer 11

can you medal me?

Answer 12

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Answer 13

sounds great Snow and Ice everywhere yet The bears are sleeping in their lair

Answer 14

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Answer 15

thats were yet shuld go

Answer 16

mr coolio can u medal me?

Answer 17

I don't know just So we still huddle around the hearth

Answer 18

@DivineSolar

Answer 19

thanks!

Answer 20

not the just

Answer 21

what about "how we huddle"

Answer 22

yes thats alot better this a great poem

Answer 23

?

Answer 24

ohhh

Answer 25

Thx

Answer 26

your welcome