Question

In a well-developed paragraph that includes a topic sentence, supporting details, and conclusion, respond to the following question:

Which was more effective at telling the story of Jimmy Valentine, the text or the film version?

Give your opinion, and then give details about each version to support your choice. Consider elements like characterization, setting, music, lighting, and emotional connection to the story.

Answer 1

Show people what you wrote so far and ask about a problem, like getting a grammar check or review. People are not going to do your work for you, but they can help you correct problems with it.

Answer 2

never mind their is a mod in here yahhhh

Answer 3

@e.mccormick he was cussing but he deleted

Answer 4

not to mention he cursed out the asker

Answer 5

he deleted it

Answer 6

it

Answer 7

No. I deleted.

Answer 8

oh is he banned

Answer 9

oh lol

Answer 10

Well, the question asks for his opinion. As you pointed out in some of the mess, he needs to do that work. If he does not, it is not his opinion. However, if he ever does come up with an opinion and were to post a question like, "Does this sound good..." or "Does this answer the assignment..." then it would be fine.

And yes, the language use needs to be clean, even if he is frustrated with a bunch of people telling him to do his own work.

Answer 11

ok

Answer 12

wow your a good moderator