Hi guys, I want to know if you like my anti - bullying report. This is my rough draft so I can still edit it so I kind of want your feedback. The document is attached below.

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anonymous · Answer

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kiakat · Answer

It's good. The only thing i could say is to maybe use less short sentences, or elaborate on the sentences you have.
 Also, if you're allowed to do this, write down how you feel personally about the subject.

anonymous · Answer

You know, I think its great! I like your anibullying slogan. I think you're going to help people do better!! I think I'll medal yours! :)

anonymous · Answer

It's great and I love that you support a great cause. :):):)