Question

hello my love
hello my pride
day one day two day three
are over now
today. day number 21
I want you to know...
you have my soul
you have my hands
you are my love
you are my pride
not one more day
in my life, never again
will be a day
without you in my great world
if you leave i'll end up
a broken mess
lovesick
a broken mess
lovesick
but never again
I could survive a day without you!

Answer 1

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Answer 2

tht a cute poem

Answer 3

great jub hun

Answer 4

Love it :)

Answer 5

thank u.... I need some feedback cause I want to use it as one of the anniversary presents for him

Answer 6

use it

Answer 7

it could use some work but it's good

Answer 8

what could I make better in ur opinion @Walkerman15

Answer 9

that was beautiful. i was smiling the whole time reading.

Answer 10

thank you...

Answer 11

NICE

Answer 12

thanks

Answer 13

@ciara9271 @abigailsimmons @kate_bell @Yuba @inkyvoyd @Jonnychewy @zepdrix @ZoMbAsH @mony01 @remboldtia3

Answer 14

That's really good

Answer 15

Its cute................... Keep being who u r

Answer 16

Indeed it ish truly a work of art O_O

Answer 17

lol yeah you got that right @fallenangelorchid