Question

Can someone please look over my argumentative essay outline and give me some feedback?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DxTNbBFJCb3R5rHK6lT45zaJ_Q_FRNUahOgGggAA0es/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

I'll look it over.
could u look over my desriptive essay?

Answer 2

wait wrong attachment.

Answer 3

Ur teacher might ask you to provide your introductory paragraph and conclusion in the outline....also indent your a's and b's
you might have to capitalize them, and then use roman numerals, to break it down even more.
the "paragraph 1, 2, 3, 4, ect" might have to be changed with a title instead of that.

Answer 4

Thanks! Does it seem (at least from the outline) like my argument makes sense and is convincing?

Answer 5

What do you think it is?

Answer 6

@gamer56 what do you mean?

Answer 7

hmm your kind of saying how building a bigger community or adding more businesses are effecting our atmosphere

Answer 8

it looks good to me, you just need to make it into an essay now to make it more understandable :D like have a thesis statement 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion, i think it will sound really good well unless thats all you have to do is on the link you showed us lol

Answer 9

it also effects our air by pollution by the mills that burn/ make paper and allows smoke to go into the air.

Answer 10

Thanks. I will make it into an essay, I just needed to know if my outline was good before I turned it into an essay. I'll definitely add air pollution to the list of cons. :)

Answer 11

no problem, and yeah its really good and i guess if you ever want to know then just ask me or tag me because i looooovvveee essays lol

Answer 12

Awesome, thanks! :D

Answer 13

Welcome x'D