Question

pelase look at my paragraph and tell me if its okay

Answer 1

@Compassionate @Destinymasha @iGreen @thomaster

Answer 2

When cells do not die, but they were supposed to they start to multiply in a different cell that is already being made. Since their is a different cell growing and its supposed to be dead a tumor develops which can push stuff away to make it fit. Tumors can either cause death or cause cancer. Over time, the tumors can replace normal tissue, crowd it, or push it aside. Some cancers, like leukemia, rarely form tumors. Instead, these cancer cells involve the blood and blood-forming organs and circulate through other tissues where they grow. Most cancer deaths are due to metastasis. Metastasis is when malignant cells penetrate into the circulatory system and establish colonies in other parts of the body.

Answer 3

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

Answer 4

i think you are missing a coma or semicolon in there somewhere...other then that i think it is really good

Answer 5

Just a couple of grammar and phrasing errors. I corrected them, you can take a look and see if you want to change those things in your paragraph or not. :)

When cells that were supposed to die do not, they start to multiply in a different cell that is already in the process of being made. Since there is a different cell growing and it's supposed to be dead, a tumor develops, which can push stuff away to make it fit. Tumors can cause either death or cancer. Over time, the tumors can replace, crowd, or push away normal tissue. Some cancers, like leukemia, rarely form tumors. Instead, these cancer cells involve blood and blood-forming organs and circulate through other tissues, where they grow. Most cancer deaths are due to metastasis. Metastasis is when malignant cells penetrate into the circulatory system and establish colonies in other parts of the body.

Answer 6

much better...it does make a little more sence

Answer 7

thank you. @leetchison

Answer 8

yeah now i need help writing my book....lol

Answer 9

yur really good at righting @Helpmeplas ....do you think you can look at the first chapter of my book

Answer 10

writing*

Answer 11

sure @demonchild99

Answer 12

here it is

Answer 13

maybe you should lay off the caps. @demonchild99

Answer 14

"awesome" story bro

Answer 15

lol....mkay...and im a girl...