Can someone give me feedback on my final draft?
I'm supposed to do a 2-3 page argumentative essay. Comments and criticism greatly appreciated. Will fan and medal!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Snndzjs9Om55avvSSTH73CPsx3ojTSQqpFnOsbDncv8/edit?usp=sharing

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Can someone give me feedback on my final draft?
I'm supposed to do a 2-3 page argumentative essay. Comments and criticism greatly appreciated. Will fan and medal!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Snndzjs9Om55avvSSTH73CPsx3ojTSQqpFnOsbDncv8/edit?usp=sharing

anonymous · Answer

Lee, what grade are you in?

anonymous · Answer

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vQZ0RjyE1gfu_z4frvWASMwRwfI5bznZPbyGboFBLuI/edit?usp=sharing Those are my notes. Sorry it's a little excessive. If you need any more help, just let me know. Double-space it and it should be at least 2 pages.

anonymous · Answer

Okay, thanks! :)

anonymous · Answer

Wow, thank you again! I really appreciate the time you put in, you have some amazing advice. By the way, I know that generification isn't a word, but I was unable to find another word with the same meaning, or another way to express that. Do you know how I could say it?
Thanks again! :)