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OpenStudy (sleepyjess):

Any suggestions on this introduction paragraph for an essay about racism? “Racism is man’s gravest threat to man – the maximum of hatred for a minimum of reason.” This statement from Abraham Joshua Heschel is very true, especially in present times. Racism is a huge problem in countries all over the world including, but not limited to, the United States, Europe, and Australia. Racism can also have a lasting psychological on people.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Try adding "effect" between "psychological" and "people," to make the sentence better. Other than that, I think it's quite good. :)

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