Hidden deep inside
A heart so cold,
It feels like stone,
Lies a secret desire
That burns like a flame.
It locked away waiting
For a person to find
One day when the
Time is just right.
Until then it shall
Remain hidden from sight;
The silent wish of a heart;
A heart whose only true
Desire is to be loved
By a single, specific person.

Question

Hidden deep inside
A heart so cold,
It feels like stone,
Lies a secret desire
That burns like a flame.
It locked away waiting
For a person to find
One day when the
Time is just right.
Until then it shall
Remain hidden from sight;
The silent wish of a heart;
A heart whose only true
Desire is to be loved
By a single, specific person.

anonymous · Answer

Constructive criticism?

anonymous · Answer

it is really really good............. and true!!!!!!!! i like it