Question

Start to my new song. I don’t have a title yet. Can you come up with one? Its a rock song BTW


Please- Take it all away
Take away the pain
Take away the blade before I use it like I shouldn’t do
Like all those times in my room
I know it hurts the ones around
Makes them fall down (hold)
But every time I feel the pain
It’s like the blade is calling my name
Calling out in vain
It’s whispering my name it says
“You don’t have to feel the pain of the day,
You don’t need to let it haunt you at night
I will make you win the fight
Pick me up and close the door
You don’t need to fight it anymore
Use me

Answer 1

take away

Answer 2

what do u think?

Answer 3

can u answer me

Answer 4

can u give me a medal plz

Answer 5

sure an di like the title thx

Answer 6

did i give u a meadl

Answer 7

i gave u a medal to

Answer 8

thx so much

Answer 9

thx for the medal

Answer 10

wat do u think

Answer 11

Take Away.

Answer 12

tht is my title do u like the song

Answer 13

@Deadpoolthekiller

Answer 14

Nice song good flow but needs a little work

Answer 15

like what im open to help

Answer 16

I like it cx keep going?

Answer 17

Here are some more lyrics to it


Im the answer to it all
and every time u fall
i will be there to cach you

Answer 18

dont be afraid
just close your eyes and all the pain
will dissapear

Answer 19

thts all i got any ideas?

Answer 20

@chefducky

Answer 21

thanks for the meadle chef

Answer 22

Yes, either Take Away or Feel. Good song, btw!

Answer 23

My suggestions: Take Away the Pain
Take Away
Pain

Answer 24

I feel "Take It Away", "Pain," etc. would be most fitting :)

Answer 25

Thx for all the wonderful ideas everyone :)

Answer 26

I really like this! Good Job I write songs my self.

Answer 27

cool can you show me one

Answer 28

@rockstar0765

Answer 29

what kind of rock we talking about?
like old rock
metal
death metal
can you give me an idea

Answer 30

have u heard of three day grace

Answer 31

YES GOOD BAND

Answer 32

*days

Answer 33

hav e u heard the song Pain by them

Answer 34

yep

Answer 35

Like tht

Answer 36

ok then

Answer 37

there my fav band

Answer 38

gtg i will be back in a little bit

Answer 39

kk

Answer 40

hey pm me really quick

Answer 41

ok

Answer 42

its a good song you just need it to be longer and break it up into 2-4 verses and a chorus, intro and outro (optional) but ya haha its a great start your a great writer

Answer 43

thx

Answer 44

anytime:)

Answer 45

@baking4lyf @Candycane @CausticSyndicalist

Answer 46

@JuliusTheGreat

Answer 47

I like it a lot :D