Question

Please check my essay I know it is too much bad but I want to improve my essay writing

Answer 1

@starrhazel123

Answer 2

I think you need to add a little more detail and correct the ones that are scratched out but other than that is seems perfectly fine

(I am a straight A student in everything but math so I am positive I am correct k)

Answer 3

okay
but how can i improve my writing
and also is there any grammatically mistakes in my essay ?

Answer 4

I will make a video on how to make your writing better and post it here k @Haseeb96
(I will be fast)

Answer 5

okay

Answer 6

can u circle my mistakes in my essay ?
@starrhazel123 if u think i have

Answer 7

Wait 4 minutes @Haseeb96 finishing up then posting k

Answer 8

@Haseeb96 getting ready to post be ready to watch k

Answer 9

okay

Answer 10

wait its loading k getting ready to post @Haseeb96

Answer 11

u tired me
we simply talk on somewhere and u just tell my mistakes
and it had done

Answer 12

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71Y2uIyJM4g&feature=share_email&ytsession=PmCq3ZjIGmi0nnSs6W2Qfw8l54UNef7YSzOuv5QJwJCZBJS5-5TG9mJHmhE8A3rIhWcs0i3ZD8EGwCvuvS8kAfyl8brBzzXZEC0wEvcFxiDe-9e2J4FlNMYzeQgAQbabqzo_1N_YX7wtoGxEU2XuOzubhSagxT-YG-oaChMAvnukASi_0GtazYXgyTD0vZil8pswf2XzzzlwoKGIaTe3yd6R28muC8Khs3fFPmKi1V0aLOr0sKPijoIc364c-usBLmeBvq609D1f5yaWcN_NQCwHODOYqpjjrpMGu2uHikMtnlrF9nD-ZLejRyDzmH7jLimRchiPeuk
go on this @Haseeb96

Answer 13

I made it with my sister it is not my voice or my sisters we use voice changer

Answer 14

@Haseeb96

Answer 15

it does not matter which voice was used

Answer 16

@surry @nessababiiii_210 @shrutipande9 please check my essay
if there is mistakes then tell me
and tell also to me how can i write the essay in better way

Answer 17

@lily108 @insa

Answer 18

i'll edit the pic n send it to u later... is it okay? cuz i gtg

Answer 19

okay its fine
i will write an essay everyday and u just check my essay daily and tell me what are my mistakes . :(