Question

life
life is like the world is round
filled with joy
sadness
a bucket of water is that remains
in this life and the after life
the world has all disappeared
but remains with the a broken heart is the person I care

Answer 1

the most about @quickstudent

Answer 2

Beautiful! :)

Answer 3

May I ask why you chose a bucket as a metaphor? :)

Answer 4

it was replacing a word

Answer 5

@Clalgee

Answer 6

What a wonderful poem. This describes the true and absolute meaning of life. Although, you could have used an alternative for bucket such as; pool, river, or even puddle. Though, the word bucket fits fine in the poem. Great work! :)

Answer 7

the word bucket was replacing a word it would not let me post on here