i need help coming up with a thesis statement. can someone help?! info down below.

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anonymous · Answer

@ParthKohli  can you help me by any chance?

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

ok a thesis statement...

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

explain a little bit more for me... im a little out of context...

anonymous · Answer

would you like to see the rest of my essay? my teacher said my thesis statement had to introduce what i was explaining in my body paragraphs.

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

yes that would help me alot:)

anonymous · Answer

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m3ga-bit3 · Answer

ok a thesis statement is a summary of what your going to be talking about..

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

so you need to sum up in 2 or 3 sentences what your going to be talking about..

anonymous · Answer

okay well if i had a start i would be able to do it. can you help me start it? you know help get the juices flowing haha xD

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

ok well you could do some thing like this...
My essay is about immigration, to be more specific, the problem of illegal immigration.
Should this be stopped? who has the power to stop it? How is this problem going to be resolved?

anonymous · Answer

omg thank you so much. this is already very helpful :3

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

for the questions at the end switch it up to questions that will be answered by the end of the essay..:)

m3ga-bit3 · Answer

your welcome:)