Question

NEW SONG!!!!

Answer 1

"HER SONG"

What would I be with out you,
Theres nothing that I need cuz im all about you,
You are my one love,
No one will ever be above,
No one could ever top you,
Nor could they stop you,
We got that strong love,
Ya our love is so true,
There wont be a thing that I do with out you,
You are always on mind,
I think about you all the time,
Youre the sweetest girl anyone will ever find,
You are so amazing got me heart beating so fast feeling like im racing,
I thank god that I found you,
If there are any girls as nice as you,
There are very few,
Now what I wanna say is that I love you,


(Chorus)

love is the one thing that last forever,
when will we be apart? Oh ya thats never,
we belong together,
we will fight together,
through what ever,
no matter the weather,
oooohhhhhhh.

(Verse 2)

when I first met you my eyes sparkled,
I knew it was meant to be,
I knew you were meant for me,
I said I would never leave,
And that is my promise that ill always keep,
Just come grab my hand,
And let me take you to dance,
Cuz we will be together, forever, and no one will ever tell us that we cant,
You belong to me and I belong to you,
You know I love you,
And ill make sure you always know I do,
The bond is so strong that itll never break,
They say life is what you make,
So I say lets make it real love and not the fake,
Just give me a hug,
And let me keep you warm,
You are my one and only in every shape and form.

(Chorus)

love is the one thing that last forever,
when will we be apart? Oh ya thats never,
we belong together,
we will fight together,
through what ever,
no matter the weather,
oooohhhhhhh.

(Outro)

oh ya I love you,
ya thats right I said it,
ya i love you,
uh never ya I love you.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

lol I know who dis be about c;

Answer 4

haha its just a songXD ;)

Answer 5

u wish ur bf could write like thisXD

Answer 6

he can cx

Answer 7

really let me do a battle?

Answer 8

Wow! This is really sweet! I just want to point out some things that I like about this song lyrics. One thing that I really like about this song lyrics is that you're rhyming every other line which is very refreshing. If your were rhyming every line, then I'd think it's some kind of rap or poem. The occasional rhyme and rhythm makes the song flow better. I also like how organized this song is laid out. You stick to the point and the fact that I can relate to what you are describing makes it even better. Keep writing more songs!

Answer 9

Also, what's the name of this song? Is it called 'Her Song' or do do mean that this song is 'Her Song'?

Answer 10

nice! I love it!!! you should record it and attach the link here so we can listen to it! \(\color{lime}{\Huge\ddot\smile}\)

Answer 11

thank you guys and its called her song

Answer 12

Your welcome! It's a beautifully written piece! All I can really say is keep on writing :)

Answer 13

Lyrical will you please message me back?

Answer 14

thank you for the support!

Answer 15

your welcome :p

Answer 16

:)

Answer 17

@LyricalDevonne can you message me please? C:

Answer 18

hya lyrical i love this it really hits home bcuz my big sis was..ya know...umm... wat this song is talking about i LOVED it

Answer 19

but then the guy broke her heart and i snapped him like a twig

Answer 20

I love it. xD And you should record it and attach a link so we can listen to it. c: How long did it take you to write this?

Answer 21

haha @Broken_heartedgirl123 thank you and im sorry to hear that im sure she is a great person and she shouldnt let anyone bring her down:)

Answer 22

it took a couple of hours because i wanted to make sure people could feel it more than just hear a story... and thank you i might record it someday who know:)

Answer 23

@BunnyBree ^

Answer 24

@...Dimps...

Answer 25

good song

Answer 26

thank you:)

Answer 27

im looking for new ideas for my own song i play guitar

Answer 28

really? what genre?

Answer 29

@DullJackel09

Answer 30

any really

Answer 31

a mix between rock and country mix idk lol

Answer 32

haha i mean idk my biggest genera is love because its something everyone can relate to and its so powerful

Answer 33

yea thats what im talking about but the flow of it is what i was refering to lol

Answer 34

oh i seeeeeeeXD here this person seems really good with love songs hold on

Answer 35

@Savane0621

Answer 36

cool thanks

Answer 37

anytime

Answer 38

@Savane0621 can you help him?

Answer 39

What's up?

Answer 40

@ofishin98

Answer 41

Damn this is very Good! I would like to hear you sing it! (:

Answer 42

haha thank you and maybe you will:)

Answer 43

Welcome (: && Yeaah When? 15 Years from now lol.

Answer 44

haha idk maybe maybe notXD you wanna sing it?XD

Answer 45

Naaah I wouldn't like to show off My BEAUTIFUL voice yanno'? You might get jealous... Lol JK (:

Answer 46

See, everyone wants you to sing it! So you have to do it. c: @LyricalDevonne

Answer 47

Foreals Huh? @BunnyBree @LyricalDevonne we'll be waiting for it

Answer 48

haha you guys are so sweet hmmmm fine ill try it out and we can see but its because of you two remember that

Answer 49

Awww Thanks ! Alright then I'll be waiting for it.... and how old are you?

Answer 50

haha im 16

Answer 51

Really? Oh I thought you were older. -.- My bad

Answer 52

haha nah how old are you?XD

Answer 53

mrs dimps?

Answer 54

Its not Mrs. <---That sounds too old, its just DIMPS and 16

Answer 55

haha then y is it bad im olderXD

Answer 56

i meant not older

Answer 57

I'm confused, Sorry I don't understand what you're trying to say

Answer 58

when i said i was 16 you responded like it was bad that i was 16XD

Answer 59

No I just thought you were older thats it... -_- You confuse people too much lol

Answer 60

haha girl u do stop playing with my emotions>.<

Answer 61

i dont even look oldXD

Answer 62

You look more like eighteen or nineteen. >.< @LyricalDevonne

Answer 63

haha nope im 16 im telling you born in 1998

Answer 64

Banana gram.

Answer 65

Woa omg that's amazing :O love it!!

Answer 66

haha thank you guys:)

Answer 67

@Clalgee here this is the link to the beat http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H07YTG5Eh7Y

Answer 68

:)) I got it @LyricalDevonne

Answer 69

haha ok:)

Answer 70

WOW that is a good beat and good lyrics . And if you want to record it instead of going to a studio u can go to think link : WWW.SoundCloud.com

Answer 71

haha yes thats where we will be going thanks to @Clalgee shes an amazing singer you should check her out her voice is beautiful and shes the best singer ik by far she has big potential and thats why i asked her to join me:)
https://soundcloud.com/peyton-lewis-3

Answer 72

WOW she does have a BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!!!!! XD

Answer 73

thx @LyricalDevonne he was in the hospital for a week he wasent excactly a football player he was weak

Answer 74

haha ya she can go all the way shes beautiful and her voice matches it shes amazing my favorite song by her was either my constant or the climax cover

Answer 75

haha wait i said he was a football player?XD

Answer 76

no just saying

Answer 77

oh i see well listen there is absolutely no one that should ever tear you down if he knocks you down get back up and stand 20x stronger

Answer 78

yep thts so true he never messed with her again and it ben three yr

Answer 79

see there wee go applause

Answer 80

tht just goes to show ican fight if u piss me off enough

Answer 81

haha it should never get that bad because if something starts to get to where theres no return you need to just walk away

Answer 82

for everyone whose here i love you all you guys are big supporters

Answer 83

yes but it was haed 4 her bcuz they had ben together for 3 yrs and then he hurt her

Answer 84

yes i get it i had to do something similar i dont date alot but the girl i dated i was dating for 2 years and i loved her then i saw she was sleeping with my bestfriend it gets better trust me its better to be safe than sorry

Answer 85

Holy freak her voice is ethereal. :O

Answer 86

woah with ur best riend some friend he is

Answer 87

ya shes amazing i love that girl all because of here voice well that and shes sweet but shes extremely talented

Answer 88

and ya ik trust me he couldnt talk for the next week he got outta the hospital thats one thing i dont like anyone messin with is my girl you can mess with my money but you wont mess with any girl in my life or any one in my family

Answer 89

same

Answer 90

ya but its ok i met sumone that could easily be a winner i just gotta get a coupla bumps fixed between us nothing to do with me but im pretty sure she has a guy

Answer 91

Uuuuuu Can I know who all of this is about? Mmmmh? (; Lol Jk. I was just being nosy (:

Answer 92

haha its a mystery:) thats where the magic truly is

Answer 93

lol. Okaay have fun with that mystery magic thingy lol