Question

Can anybody help me find grammar mistakes/feedback in my essay? Pm Me :D <3

Answer 1

businesses not business's
insert "and" between "commercials" and "telecasting"
"that the viewer’s will quickly understand." It's "viewers"
"use Aristotle's appeal; ethos because it appears to one’s emotions and gives them something to remember." You're thinking of pathos, not ethos.
Other than that, pretty good. I love that ad. XD

Answer 2

could you tell me if which paragraphs the mistakes are located in the essay and do I have any punctuation errors?

Answer 3

It's kinda hard to tell paragraphs in the messages, sorry. The punctuation errors I saw were just the ones I listed.

Answer 4

ohh lol ok ill try to find them then ^^

Answer 5

Hey, re-reading your essay is a good way to find errors lol

Answer 6

i've tried that method a couple of times, I'm terrible at catching punctuation errors