Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.

Which of these phrases uses the best voice and word choice for an adventure story?

a. It was a dark and stormy night; the breath of the cool breeze sent shivers up my spine.

b. The little mice danced with joy because they were so excited about their new home.

c. Her grandmother's voice grew weak as she told the story of her journey to America.

d. Leonard ran so quickly his heart was beating out of his chest and his lungs burned.

Question

Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.

Which of these phrases uses the best voice and word choice for an adventure story?

a. It was a dark and stormy night; the breath of the cool breeze sent shivers up my spine.

b. The little mice danced with joy because they were so excited about their new home.

c. Her grandmother's voice grew weak as she told the story of her journey to America.

d. Leonard ran so quickly his heart was beating out of his chest and his lungs burned.

anonymous · Answer

i think a, but im not 100% sure

anonymous · Answer

It isn't A because if you ever read a young children's novel its a "scary story". B sounds like a children's tale, so that isn't it. C may be it. D sounds like something from an adventure.  So my best guess is D and C runs in close second.

anonymous · Answer

Just go with D

anonymous · Answer

Make sure to award medals and close the question. I hope I helped and have a nice day!