Which of the following would be the most effective feedback to give in a peer review?

“The topic of your paper is clear and interesting in the beginning, but you might need to add more details to give your topic more clarity.”
“I liked your paper. It was fun to read.”
“The beginning of your paper is boring, so I didn’t finish reading it because I thought it was stupid.”
“I didn’t understand what you were trying to say.”

Question

Which of the following would be the most effective feedback to give in a peer review?
 	
	“The topic of your paper is clear and interesting in the beginning, but you might need to add more details to give your topic more clarity.”
	“I liked your paper. It was fun to read.”
	“The beginning of your paper is boring, so I didn’t finish reading it because I thought it was stupid.”
	“I didn’t understand what you were trying to say.”

anonymous · Answer

First one.