Question

NY NEW SONG!!!!!! TELL ME WAT YOU THINK

Answer 1

( Intro)

You Keep trying and tring
but it gets really hard
when you feel like no noe cares
when all you hear is there remarks in your ears
you dont know how your gonna keep pusing on

(Chours)


You keep crying and crying
and lieing when ever people ask you if your ok
you do things in your room to hide what your going through
they see the scares on your arms
and they refer you to therapy
but dont they get it
dont they see
theyre the ones who cause it all
youll never know
so you keep pushing on(hold)

(Verse 1)
summer rolls round
all you wear is long sleves
to hide the cold and emptyness you feel inside
you think "maybe if i hide it all the pain will go away"
But it dont work that way
you have to feel the pain of everyday

(chours)
You keep crying and crying
and lieing when ever people ask you if your ok
you do things in your room to hide what your going through
they see the scares on your arms
and they refer you to therapy
but dont they get it
dont they see
theyre the ones who cause it all
youll never know
so you keep pushing on(Fades out)

Answer 2

@chefducky

Answer 3

@ZoMbAsH

Answer 4

@danish071996

Answer 5

Nice

Answer 6

nice

Answer 7

thanks

Answer 8

@taylor12344

Answer 9

u shoulda give me a best response

Answer 10

good

Answer 11

there i gave u best respons @chefducky

Answer 12

thx

Answer 13

ur welcome

Answer 14

its very nice

Answer 15

its very nice


( Intro)

You Keep trying and tring
but it gets really hard
when you feel like no noe cares
when all you hear is there remarks in your ears
you dont know how your gonna keep pusing on

(Chours)


You keep crying and crying
and lieing when ever people ask you if your ok
you do things in your room to hide what your going through
they see the scares on your arms
and they refer you to therapy
but dont they get it
dont they see
theyre the ones who cause it all
youll never know
so you keep pushing on(hold)

(Verse 1)
summer rolls round
all you wear is long sleves
to hide the cold and emptyness you feel inside
you think "maybe if i hide it all the pain will go away"
But it dont work that way
you have to feel the pain of everyday

(chours)
You keep crying and crying
and lieing when ever people ask you if your ok
you do things in your room to hide what your going through
they see the scares on your arms
and they refer you to therapy
but dont they get it
dont they see
theyre the ones who cause it all
youll never know
so you keep pushing on(Fades out)

Answer 16

i like it a lot

Answer 17

i love it ^_^

Answer 18

thx u guys I think imma add more to it?!?!?!?!?! IDK wat do u think?

Answer 19

@sailawaywithme

Answer 20

ANYONE WITH A GREAT SINGING VOICE AND A SOUND CLOUD CAN SING THIS AND POST IT AND SEND ME THE LINK!!! JUST BE SURE TO SAY THAt I WROTE IT!

Answer 21

i only say tht because i am grounded and I cant post it right now

Answer 22

I can try to sing it for yah Destiny. cx Keyword.. try

Answer 23

I would, but I have a school laptop and right now its not letting me on sound cloud and mess with it x3.

Answer 24

I did a remake and messed around with it, I don't know if you guys will like it though..

Into
You keep trying and trying
But it gets really hard
When you feel like no one cares
When all you hear is their remarks
You don’t know how your gonna keep pushing on
(chorus)
You keep crying and crying
And lying when ever people ask you, if you’re okay
You do things in your room, to hide what you’re going through
They see the scars on your arms
And they refer you to therapy
But don’t they get it
They’re the ones who cause it all
Don’t they see that they had let me fall
They’ll never know
So you keep pushing on (hold)
(verse 1)
Summer rolls around
All you wear is your long sleeves
Hiding the cold, and emptiness, that you feel inside
Isolated from everyone, with your disguise
You think “,maybe if I hide it all, the pain will go away”
But if only you knew that things don’t work out that way
You have to face your biggest fears or live in your dark days
(chorus)
You keep crying and fightin
Repeating all your lies
“yes I’m okay, I’m doing fine”
fake a smile, hide in your disguise
in your room, you start to bleed
Giving yourself a dose of what you need
They see the scars on your arms
Now they know about your self-harm
And they refer you to therapy
But don’t they get it
Don’t they see
They’re the ones who did this to me
They’ll never know
But keep holding (fades out)

Answer 25

@Broken_heartedgirl123

Answer 26

hey im the one who gave her the layout just sayingXD

Answer 27

i get the best response cuz its amazingXD

Answer 28

xD what????

Answer 29

haha nothing you had to be there to get it

Answer 30

i like it...one suggestion are u taking suggestions

Answer 31

ok well i giv it to u...on ur chorus i think for the part where it say ok and though...u should make it echo like ok..ok or though ough...and when it say hold make it like oeoneon like u get wa i sayin

Answer 32

lol^ i dont think anyone understoodXD

Answer 33

o srry...umm idk how to make it simpler i cant talk on the web...ummm...ok hang on

Answer 34

haha ya the problem was grammar thats all

Answer 35

wait i just recorded wat i want to say i attach it on this

Answer 36

yah i understood most of it just wat is oeoneon

Answer 37

and dont laugh if i dont sound good at the demonstration...it early and i dont have music to go by

Answer 38

wait a sec

Answer 39

i dont have much of a choice do i

Answer 40

nope

Answer 41

it not bad it just sound like i tired...if i had music to go by i would sound way better but it not bad

Answer 42

put ur own spin on it do it to watever music u want

Answer 43

it reallly does sound good tho shes talented

Answer 44

ok well wait a sec...ya i agree i just had some pointers

Answer 45

hahaa ok

Answer 46

r u talking bout me lyrical

Answer 47

ya

Answer 48

AWWW thx dude ur talented to

Answer 49

ok well my phone is not workin but think of it like this say on then add eon then add another eon oneoneon

Answer 50

tell me if dat help

Answer 51

yah i think i understand

Answer 52

Lyrical can u rap pretty well

Answer 53

ok cool srry if it was confusing

Answer 54

no its ok things over the internet are often confusing

Answer 55

true dat well cya goin to help pthers

Answer 56

thanks @Broken_heartedgirl123 haha

Answer 57

k bye

Answer 58

so cna ya lyrical?

Answer 59

wa

Answer 60

so can i what?

Answer 61

rap well

Answer 62

its really good @Broken_heartedgirl123

Answer 63

oh sorry i didnt see this @Broken_heartedgirl123 haha ya i can

Answer 64

oh well the chours is a rap