Could someone check my verb tense in this sentence?
The second example is that Jeannette, Brain, and Lori had proper moral values. They grew up respecting their parents, no matter how bad the parents were. While the Walls family lived in Battle Mountain, Jeannette got an unwelcome “boyfriend”, Billy. One day he invited her to his house to show her something funny. When they got there the only thing she saw was Billy’s father, drunk and asleep in his own urine. For Billy this was funny, but Jeannette couldn’t see the humor in that. She then said, “You’re not supposed to laugh at your own father

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Could someone check my verb tense in this sentence? 
The second example is that Jeannette, Brain, and Lori had proper moral values. They grew up respecting their parents, no matter how bad the parents were. While the Walls family lived in Battle Mountain, Jeannette got an unwelcome “boyfriend”, Billy. One day he invited her to his house to show her something funny. When they got there the only thing she saw was Billy’s father, drunk and asleep in his own urine. For Billy this was funny, but Jeannette couldn’t see the humor in that. She then said, “You’re not supposed to laugh at your own father

anonymous · Answer

it sounds right to me