Question

ok im also writing a story i have the opening scene done but i feel like it needs more can you guys help me out

Answer 1

Whats the story about? Can you show me the opening scene?

Answer 2

yeah one sec trying to find the file

Answer 3

this is it

Answer 4

so what do you think by the way dont try to steal it ive already copyrighted that

Answer 5

I think it's good. But I don't really get the idea of what kind of story you are making. It doesn't look like to need any more introduction, just keep going with the story.

Answer 6

thank you by the way the kind of story im tring to write is like the book hero

Answer 7

I never heard of that book.

Answer 8

its realy good

Answer 9

by the way quick student try looking on google for that essay of yours you can find some really good ones just remember to put it in your own words

Answer 10

Ok thanks for the suggestion:)

Answer 11

your welcome