what is one way to revise a narrative

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anonymous · Answer

you need to ensure that  you clearly identify the experience you are narrating,eliminate repetitive information,use precise descriptive details,maintain a consistent tone and conclude explaining the particular significance you have related in the essay.

anonymous · Answer

Make sure what you were feeling when it happened is clear in the story. Of course, check for grammar mistakes and that you have a clear beginning, middle, and ending. Use figurative language through-out all of your piece. I know it might be a little obvious but, I hope this helps.

anonymous · Answer

GIVE DETAILS. Do not be vague.