Question

What do you guy think ????!???
XD

Answer 1

That Road
(Verse 1)
on day I was sitting there watching TV,
my mom came in and said hey I want to ask you a question,
I said OK what is it ?
she said if we could move anywhere where would you want to move to,
I said IDK what were you thinking ?
and she said I was thinking hear I said yeah not knowing that would ruin my life,
yeah, we had a fun trip ups and down and we just go off a dirty and dark rode,
or so we thought we got there and I looked at her and I said ,

(Chorus)
hear we go back down that road,
dirty and dark nobody knows ,
scream or shout inside or out ,
nobody comes because nobody care,

(Verse 2)
days pass into months ,
months pass into years ,
now hear I am sitting in a dark room ,
crying myself to sleep ,
waiting for a miracle,
then on on day I looked at you,
and I said ,

(chorus)
hear we go back down that road,
dirty and dark nobody knows,
scream or shout inside or out,
nobody comes because nobody cares,

Answer 2

i don't have the melody for it yet

Answer 3

haha it wasnt bad tbh it was a little dark for meXD

Answer 4

i liked it i think when u say dirty and dark just make it dirty, dark road

Answer 5

and hold the road...road-----

Answer 6

haha ya thats not bad lol i cant help because i write mostly love songs and happy endings haha

Answer 7

y true i seen ur songs i like those but i like this one to but really dark like really dark

Answer 8

yeh i kown u do :P u write incredible songs @LyricalDevonne

Answer 9

yey it is suppos to be

Answer 10

haha thank you and ya this is really good i just cant give feed back because its not my cup of tea but you did great

Answer 11

yeah Thank you

Answer 12

@KamiBug what do u think about this song ????

Answer 13

THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!
ppl were saying that it is soo dark :P

Answer 14

i enjoy dark songs because my soul is dark and im traped

Answer 15

but i liked it

Answer 16

only inn the first verse make it ryhm a little more

Answer 17

yeh welcome to the clube *smile*

Answer 18

thx *frown*

Answer 19

yey u get use to it LOL

Answer 20

OK IF ANYONE THINKS THEY HAVE A GOOD MELODY FOR THIS SONG GO AHEAD AND TELL ME I AM OPEN FOR SUGGESTIONS !!! :D

Answer 21

ok hear is the song i updated it the Title

Answer 22

the new one is great
:)

Answer 23

lol love them both.

Answer 24

Thank you @BabyGirlAj and @LyricalDevonne

Answer 25

you're welcome :)

Answer 26

but hey @LyricalDevonne i though u said u could not give feedback on it cuz it was not the type u wrote but hey from wat i got from ur new song i think it is starting to be ur type of songs XD MABY hop not cuz u are really good at love songs i mean i love the new one but......

Answer 27

haha ya imma stay with love songs but i just wanted everyone to see that i can write anything haha

Answer 28

o OK good *wehw* :P

Answer 29

i love both of em @Broken_heartedgirl123 you like dark? iv got a bunch of dark songs ,sayings, thoughts, ext. if you guys are willing to read a few of em i might a few on here just pm me or something an i will

Answer 30

Great job, keep writing!

Answer 31

OK Thank you i will @Rainbow_Sparkles
And can i PM u too @priecethevil ?

Answer 32

like it reminds me of my song the road has a story to tell

Answer 33

OK hear i edited the song :

Answer 34

LOL Srry i was editing it LOL mbad :(

Answer 35

Thanks XD XD

Answer 36

OK IF ANYONE THINKS THEY HAVE A GOOD MELODY FOR THIS SONG GO AHEAD AND TELL ME I AM OPEN FOR SUGGESTIONS !!! :D

Answer 37

love keep it up maybe some day it will be on the radio

Answer 38

like sound for the song

Answer 39

yeh LOL

Answer 40

i play music i can help

Answer 41

That is wat i ment

Answer 42

how you want the song sad happy

Answer 43

sad

Answer 44

ok i play guitar

Answer 45

wowo i am learning to play the paino i can play it vurtuly nad i can play wrcking ball XD that is coooolll though

Answer 46

so you don't have a tune yet right
if so

i have one

Answer 47

OK yey i dont and i wish i could record it at soundcloud but for some odd reason my mic dont work i dont know wat my dad did to my computer

Answer 48

This is a big step up from rap battles jamie

Answer 49

wat ?
ok

Answer 50

Dont remember Dulljackel09?

Answer 51

yey i do y?

Answer 52

Im him

Answer 53

wait you are???

Answer 54

OMG hey LOL y u get a new one ?

Answer 55

LMAO IKR

Answer 56

no wonder your so chill i just got a warning for the freestule i posted lol

Answer 57

Yep an because the mods hated me lol fan me so we can pm each other

Answer 58

I DIDI XD I AM AM UNFANING UR OTHER ONE SCINCE U DONT USE IT

Answer 59

I do im just

Answer 60

ur just wat ?

Answer 61

Just chill right now

Answer 62

is there a problem

Answer 63

Yea i dont like your tone XD

Answer 64

who me

Answer 65

yep im just playing with you

Answer 66

ok cus if you not joking you'll be suspended

Answer 67

Excuse me wanna run that by me again

Answer 68

just joking

Answer 69

haha he takes stuff too seriously @Banes dont even jokeCX

Answer 70

Better be or you might end up in my next rap making me a million

Answer 71

he told me yesterday he could beat my a**

Answer 72

who me ;)

Answer 73

Am i talking to someone else mica?

Answer 74

haha banes dude did you see my last song?

Answer 75

Yep

Answer 76

i have 31 medals haha

Answer 77

XD i got 215

Answer 78

@Jamielynne when do you want the sound for your song done

Answer 79

On my main of course

Answer 80

@Jamielynne

Answer 81

@micahm i dont matter srry i left

Answer 82

@LyricalDevonne
did u get the tag i tag u in ?

Answer 83

ya haha hes not on

Answer 84

ok

Answer 85

sorry i got tagged in 11 different things

Answer 86

DANGGGGG !!!!!!!!!!

Answer 87

ur a bussie Guy LOL

Answer 88

nahhhh idk why they keep tagging me

Answer 89

LOL is it in music ?

Answer 90

hmm i don't get it

Answer 91

do you want music to it or not

Answer 92

get wat ?

Answer 93

do you want sound to the song

Answer 94

Yes sorry

Answer 95

ok when do you want the sound for the music i might make a couple and how long do you want the music to last

Answer 96

o i will leave that up to u cuz IDK