Question

ok guys new song:)

Answer 1

“Our Truth”

(verse1)

Who am i?
I look in deep,
I close my eyes and pray for my soul to keep,
To my surprise,
Other people try,
To help me when im down and I start to cry,
I always think about you,
What we could be and whats really true,
I fell In love with you,
But we cant be together so it breaks my heart too,
I guess it’s a game that ill always lose,
Maybe I gotta step up my game,
Or maybe develop a wider range,
But im not leaving with out you,
You can knock me down again and again,
But I wont stop till love comes and lands,
When cupid shoots us with his arrows,
Or we get the blessing from Egypt’s pharos,
I just in my bed and think about you every night,
It always makes do for a good night sleep,
Dream about taking your heart for me to keep,
We could last foreva,
Ya me and you togetha,
But it seems like this is were we’re stuck,
So just listen up,

(chorus)

we’re like a roller coaster just riding up and down,
sometimes riding around town,
other times were just burning the house down,
it’s a work of magic,
theres no other way that id have it,
except thing,
and that is to have your heart,

(verse2)

now you know that I love you.,
but do you love me, no I don’t thing that’s true,
we could be happy,
for all eternity,
we could have fun,
that’s how I want it to be,
but let me ask who are you?
Do you do you try to stay true,
Guess not,
Cuz if you did then we could cut all the bullsh**,
And be together,
You got something for me but you wanna hide it,
Im sure youll deny it,
Be actions is the language of a thousand words,
Its like saying a paragraph in one quick surge,
So why don’t you just open up your heart,
And let me be a part,
Cuz we were to be from the start

(chorus)

we’re like a roller coaster just riding up and down,
sometimes riding around town,
other times were just burning the house down,
it’s a work of magic,
theres no other way that id have it,
except thing,
and that is to have your heart,

Answer 2

good good i like the flow

Answer 3

can i make a sugestion tho

Answer 4

ya?

Answer 5

ok so in the end i feel like....u should add another vers to end it...just a sugestion

Answer 6

haha ya i made this in like 5 minutesXD

Answer 7

i wanted sumone to be featured on this track tho so ya

Answer 8

oh cool imma pm u the start to my new song u tell me ur thoughts

Answer 9

haha ok:)

Answer 10

ill tell u later cuz i gtg do sumthing

Answer 11

nice lyrics

Answer 12

i l<3ved it :D *BIG SMILES*
I just love the songs u write @LyricalDevonne

Answer 13

ikr all his songs are da bomb

Answer 14

haha you guys are so sweet:)

Answer 15

Thats chill man

Answer 16

thanks:)

Answer 17

Yeah no problem