Question

Can someone check my poem i dont know if i have errors on it. Thanks :)

Song of Myself

My real is crazy and not caring about anything
God to me is my everything without him in my life I wouldn't be here today. He knows me very well and he also knows everything that I have done whether its good or bad
To God I am his beautiful creation
Yesterday my name was chinese girl that had very stretched eyes
I love music I don't know what I would do without
I am loved by my family and friends they are the best
I am amazed by how I have changed throughout the years but it's good to have changes in life
I can see my future and everything that will be happening in it
To my country I am just another person living on this planet
My country is to me a big place full of different cultures
Today my name is daughter, cousin, and friend
Nature to me is beautiful I love seeing the different surroundings that change everyday
I am to nature just another person that liters and pollutes it without caring
Mankind is cruel because you can't get along with anyone
Truth is found when you actually look for it
Hope lives in each and every one of us
My power is to make my friends happy
Tomorrow my name will be strong because I will be able to get through everything that goes on in life
Secretly I know my name is frightened of doing new things
I affect the world by what I do whether it's good or bad
The world affects me by having friends that later end up leaving
My name once was shy girl that didn't want to talk to anyone
I am just another girl that is trying to figure out who she really is

Answer 1

I love it!

Answer 2

Thanks :)

Answer 3

That was BEAUTIFUL *^-^ I loved it, there's nothing wrong with what was stated in the poem,

but normally when we're referring to God (swt) with words like "He" or "His" it's kinda necessary to capitalize them~

2 thumbs up :D

Answer 4

Thank you :) ok i will fix that :)

Answer 5

I luv this poem! It's very sweet and real!

Answer 6

Aww thanks :)