Question

guys great new song i wrote for you guys to see!!!!!!!
check it out

Answer 1

(Verse1)

better watch what you ask from me,
you might get nothing but catastrophe,
for blasting me,
i am immortal,
steppin into your world like a portal,
i been making it with out you,
my life aint even about you,
but its ok haters gonna hate that,
doubters gonna doubt that,
i know all about that,
you werent my first nor will be my last,
your just another mistake from the past,
something that i rushed into way to fast,
gotta heal it and put on a cast,
ya this is me,
this is how its gonna be,
i dont really care wat you see,
but all i know is that im free,

(chorus)

now i know its much too late,
but imma try fix my mistake,
because it wasnt fate,
(i gotta forget about you)
you broke my heart,
and your tore it apart,
now you sent to a place so dark,

(verse2)

now i dont really care if you think im alright,
but no matter what im still gonna put up a fight,
cuz this night wont be my last night,
it wont be my last time,
ive got many things on my mind,
your the only girl that i care find,
you can go ahead and open up your eyes,
and realize,
that im not like other guys,
i wanna be able to live my life,
and to make it nice,
thats right im gonna take my own advice,
and yes you will pay the price,
nobodies perfect,
but i can definitely say that your not worth it,
and you deserve it,
so get outta my face,
cuz your nothing but a disgrace,
to the human race,

(chorus)

now i know its much too late,
but imma try fix my mistake,
because it wasnt fate,
(i gotta forget about you)
you broke my heart,
and your tore it apart,
now you sent to a place so dark,

(verse3)

its like a slap attack,
cause you to have a cataract,
got your heart beating so fast for me that you have a heart attack,
but then again you need a heart for that,
and that is something that you lack,
always pin pointing peoples problems like a thumb tack,
ill forget about you,
cuz i always stay true,
my name is lyrical,
and trust me forgetting about you wont take a miracle

(chorus)

now i know its much too late,
but imma try fix my mistake,
because it wasnt fate,
(i gotta forget about you)
you broke my heart,
and your tore it apart,
now you sent to a place so dark,

Answer 2

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Answer 3

wow so cool u should be a singer

Answer 4

haha how did you know?;)

Answer 5

ur so damn good! ;D

Answer 6

thank you

Answer 7

:)

Answer 8

That was good. XD

Answer 9

thank you:)
If you guys could let other people know it id appreciate it if you hit it up with a medal:)

Answer 10

6 medals in 4 hours!!!!

Answer 11

Hahhahahahah woah
!!!! XD

Answer 12

XD

Answer 13

ur really good! could you help me? :)

Answer 14

haha sure:)

Answer 15

thanks!

Answer 16

anytime

Answer 17

wow amazing

Answer 18

@5SOSISLIFE @Jhannybean @alyssa_michelle1996 @Tina_Russo @young.money @Sierra_Horan @Gabylovesyou

Answer 19

@KyanTheDoodle

Answer 20

Ah! Why am I here?!

Answer 21

haha im just seeing if its trueXD

Answer 22

What? That I can write songs?

Answer 23

better than me i just wanna see

Answer 24

cuz ya never know

Answer 25

Alright. But it'll take a while for me to think of a melody.

Answer 26

@jordanloveangel what do you think am i bad at writing?

Answer 27

You should have more continuing rhymes. For example: I bought a cat with a hat who lays on a mat. Try putting three or four rhymes before you start a whole new rhyme.

Answer 28

ya i uploaded this originally as a comment to someone elses song in 5 minsXD

Answer 29

nahhh ur good very good

Answer 30

this isnt meant to be straight rap you know that rightXD this is kinda a mixture of r&b and rapXD so kinda like hip hop

Answer 31

thank you jordan this is why oyur my girlXD

Answer 32

Ohhh my bad haha. Then yeah it's pretty good dude good job.

Answer 33

I made a song once. But the melody wasn't mine.

Answer 34

haha thank youXD

Answer 35

just one song?

Answer 36

Nah. Lots.

Answer 37

oh i was gonna say how are you bettter than me thenXD

Answer 38

'Cause the song was so great, it overpowered all of your silly little lyrics. :P

Answer 39

XD ok we can seeXD have you even recorded anyXD

Answer 40

Yup. But my microphone quality was pretty bad, and they were translyrics of a Japanese song. (I translated them)

Answer 41

so you havent recorded your own musicXD

Answer 42

Well I didn't TRANSLATE them, but I made an english version of it, containing some details of my own.

Answer 43

thanx @LyricalDevonne <3

Answer 44

haha anytime @jordanloveangel <3

Answer 45

same thingXD i wanna see completely original work

Answer 46

Fine. Then I'll make some.

Answer 47

alot of the people asking for you to write songs on here are singing on an album and you cant steal sumone elses and put it on your album

Answer 48

sweet!

Answer 49

aye @LyricalDevonne im kinda writing songs and im still working on my first song we should work 2gether

Answer 50

haha i can definitely work on it with you but msg me because i dont want as many comments as the last one

Answer 51

that was really good

Answer 52

thank you:)

Answer 53

I was reading the comment and everyone is trying to improve it but I think its perfect just how it is. :)

Answer 54

Yeah yeah whatever I'll do it. In the mean time you can see something I sang over and over again. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gNHZZfmIBDw

Answer 55

@Tina_Russo you are the sweetest:* thank you for your compliment <3

Answer 56

your welcome

Answer 57

Oh yes I forgot, I also write parodies.

Answer 58

like what?

Answer 59

Well my profile image was the image used as a parody of a Vocaloid song "Creepy Toast"

Answer 60

*in a parody

Answer 61

nice

Answer 62

i have never heard of it but i will look it up when i have the chance

Answer 63

aye tina msg me

Answer 64

@KyanTheDoodle if you wanna hear the type of music that i write there is a writer that is the same as me and shes amazing her names peyton and her username is @Clalgee heres her link
https://soundcloud.com/peyton-lewis-3/my-constant-original

Answer 65

she is a goddess XD

Answer 66

Then what the hail is she doing down here on Earth?

Answer 67

because she wants to help other people by sharing her gifts because shes not selfish wanting to live in heaven

Answer 68

Don't they have internet in heaven though?

Answer 69

I mean I wouldn't want to live anywhere without internet.

Answer 70

idk nor wouold she because she isnt selfish

Answer 71

So even though she could have internet to share her music in heaven AND live in paradise, she'd choose not to? Seems like sort of a dumb decision to me.

Answer 72

its because she still wants to make sure she isnt hurting her family going to heaven and staying with her because she is a beautiful amazing and sweet girl that everyone loves even me! and she knows id miss her

Answer 73

Well usually goddesses either don't have parents or their parents live in heaven with her. And if she's a goddess, she could make anything happen in the blink of an eye!

Answer 74

omg you would have to be dumb to believe that because someone can be so pure and a freak acccident happens and she dies then her parents are with out her and are devestated so instead of leaving them she decided to stay shes amazing and thats that i love that girl with all my heart cuz shes my homie dont hate just appreciate no more talking bad or jokin just click on the link

Answer 75

I think you're making to big a deal out of this. XD

Answer 76

nope i think shes a godXD

Answer 77

Okay that's great.

Answer 78

dangggg no need to get all weird on me now

Answer 79

How am I being weird...actually. Don't answer that.

Answer 80

haha okXD

Answer 81

But yeah. Music isn't really something I wanna do for a living. It's more of a hobby.

Answer 82

totally loved it it's very very impressive. I really like it.

Answer 83

so do i

Answer 84

thank you guys:) well girlsXD

Answer 85

na its cool I don't care if u call me a guy I say it all the time

Answer 86

hahaXD you call yourself a guy?

Answer 87

yea I mostly hang with guys

Answer 88

XD

Answer 89

WOW LIKE I DIED

Answer 90

OMG, that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 91

haha thanks ladies:)

Answer 92

Yaaassssss!!!