Question

love life
my life with u will never go away
i understand life will go on but i dont want us to be apart
i need someone like to to save and help me be put back together
for me to
love you
kiss you
and never forget you
till we both die together
@quickstudent

Answer 1

Wow, I really like this one<3

Answer 2

so did my mom and dad

Answer 3

Sure! This one shows deeper understanding:)

Answer 4

i am in the process of making a new poem and it is going to be better than this one

Answer 5

Oh really? I'd love to see that too:D

Answer 6

yea i will post it later or sometime this week

Answer 7

:) OK

Answer 8

i will message u later if i get it done okay

Answer 9

Alright.

Answer 10

sounds like a plan

Answer 11

@One098

Answer 12

I love it! @MakaylaTracy

Answer 13

Dude awesome !! @MakaylaTracy @o@

Answer 14

thank you to everyone

Answer 15

I just fell in love with this.. but why was I not tagged?

Answer 16

@Clalgee

Answer 17

This poem shows the beauty inside and out. I can feel the pain that the person in the poem is referring to. Though one minor thing. Towards the 4th line, you added the word, "TO" twice. Other than that, great work!