Question

I have to write a essay on Shakespeare Play OTHELLO. My thesis statement is: William Shakespeare's play Othello portrays that trust brings out vunerability within the characters which leads to their demise. Is this a sold thesis? And what would be three main ideas I could use for this thesis, if good?

Answer 1

Try using more adjectives

Answer 2

such as what? @Compassionate

Answer 3

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Answer 4

You're telling "why." Remember, Describe NOT tell. Be more descriptive. Use an example from the story.

Answer 5

Could you Help ME? @Compassionate

Answer 6

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Answer 7

Like I said, be more descriptive and use examples from the story. Think about it.

Answer 8

okay. So are you saying that I need to rework my thesis?

Answer 9

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