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Add adjectives to improve the following passage.

The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

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Add adjectives to improve the following passage.


The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

kyanthedoodle · Answer

The man stopped by the park to pet the friendly dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of an Italian restaurant. He jumped out of the bus and ran up the steps. A little while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.