Can someone please look over my work to see if I did the correct thing?

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Coaches make about $53.4 million combined, the actual players who work for the coaches money and are injured for it, make nothing; not a penny.
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College athletes should be payed to play because they're the ones working and get injured to make the coach's money. The coach is the one that trains, makes plans, routes, and directs the players.
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Can someone please look over my work to see if I did the correct thing? 

Write your claim in the space below.
	Coaches make about $53.4 million combined, the actual players who work for the coaches money and are injured for it, make nothing; not a penny.
Write your counterclaim in the space below.
 College athletes should be payed to play because they're the ones working and get injured to make the coach's money. The coach is the one that trains, makes plans, routes, and directs the players.
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anonymous · Answer

I see nothing particularly wrong with it...

elise_a18 · Answer

if you know what a claim and counterclaim is is that how it's done?