Question

please help with more parallel structure, correct the error.
1.Brice likes to ski, to swim and rock climbing.
2. Marsha wanted to make sure that she made her presentation creatively, effectively and she wanted it ot be neat.
3. The new house has a large porch, an eat-in kitchen, and the floors are carpeted.

Answer 1

1.) Brice likes skiing, swimming, and rock climbing


2.) Marsha wanted to make sure that she made her presentation creatively,
effectively, and neatly.

3.) The new house has a large porch, an eat-in kitchen, and carpeted floors.

Answer 2

@Empress* oh yeah that sounds better :)

Answer 3

Thank you :D Yours sound great too~

Answer 4

thank you both I wish I could give you both medals if I can how do I?

Answer 5

You can't give 2 medals, but it's fine :D you don't have to give either so that it stays fair :3

Answer 6

thank you for your help

Answer 7

No Problem at all *^-^