Question

can somebody listen to my poem ?

Answer 1

Sure

Answer 2

if I get a medal... lol

Answer 3

Sure. Could you post it?

Answer 4

one sec...

Answer 5

Like an apple that has fallen from a tree,
my soul is rotting and it has taken me down with me.
Deep in the emotions of my misery
are the feelings that cannot ever seem to be set free.
You could say others have had it worse than me,
but until you take a few steps in the worn out path of my misery,
with the burdens I've carried, only then can you unravel my mystery.
If only to stumble on shards of glass,
only then to empathize the pain that I stash.
The scars always there never to vanish,
never to be repaired.
The physical pain may have vanquished,
but the emotional pain will always lay stagnant in my mind,
Always to remind me of a broken home.
The pain my endured through my lost childhood
that made permanent cracks in the building blocks of my foundation.
Leaving the ones who've moved into our life
to mend the cracks with their love,
to suffer the sometimes bitterness that was left behind,
forever in our minds

Answer 6

@Rachella

Answer 7

@jordanloveangel

Answer 8

@Aamirgsen

Answer 9

Nice, great poem! Congrats on writing it! :)

Answer 10

thanxz think ill get an a ?

Answer 11

btw will u hear one mo'

Answer 12

My pleasure and yeah, sure.

Answer 13

The darkness surrounds me
It's getting so cold
I'm all alone
With no one to hold

My world is so empty
All what's left is pain
No sunshine to light my way
Just never ending rain

I drown in tears
My heart is crying
No one seems to notice
My soul is dying

Answer 14

@Rachella

Answer 15

:'( need to start makeing happy poemz

Answer 16

Awhh. That makes me emotional but once again, great poem! :)

Answer 17

thanxz will meadal u alot

Answer 18

It's really sad but it's really well written hahaha

Answer 19

thanxz

Answer 20

They are really good