Question

what do u guys think of my poems @LyricalDevonne ?
"The Fighter"
I the fight got through a big war.
Not a war with swords.
A war with love.
The heart of steal is cracked.
But is never gone.
She always stands no matter the pain.
The enemy falls even though he believes he won.
He will soon get his share of heartache.
The enemy always loses.
And never truly loves.
He plays mind games.
But I the fighter will always figure it out in the end.
The fighter.

Answer 1

"How Could I"
How could I give in so easily.
I just let you brain wash me.
I let my heart speak.
And in return you killed all my feelings.
In just three months.
You pulled my soul out.
You took my heart.
And you ran away.
You moved on with no question.
And I let is happen.
I was blind by your lies and acts.
I was not looking past it all and listening to myself.
You tore the life out of me.
And I am fighting through it all.
How could I love a liar and let him get away with it.

"What Should I Do?"
Do I follow my heart now?
Or do I just listen to everyone.
They are all just stuck in my head.
I cant escape it.
I feel suffocated.
I am in everyones shadow.
They are all living through me.
What should I do?
Do I just deal with it?
Should I run from it all.
I cant take it anymore I feel lost again.
No where to go.
No where to hide.
Just the loud voices.
Repeating.
Saying just do it.
You wont be drowning anymore.
Just get away.
I scream trying to stop.
I can do it no longer.
I hope to stop it all.
What should i do?

Answer 2

Do not use this section for posting poems. We have a separate writing section for that. Read \(\href{http:///openstudy.com/updates/5476e547e4b013982de9ce52}{\sf this}\) to know more about Music Group rules.

Answer 3

Nice Poem

Answer 4

thanks:)

Answer 5

NP :D

Answer 6

and tbh poems r a way to write songs.. @Abhisar

Answer 7

But they should not be posted in the Music Group.

Answer 8

This is to keep things Organized.

Answer 9

http://openstudy.com/updates/5476e547e4b013982de9ce52

Answer 10

soo.. why does it matter u look thru the music there are more then just my poems on here

Answer 11

@Abhisar She didnt know and thanks for reminding us evan though its annoying. you already told her and the question is closed already so stop pestering her

Answer 12

lol...thanks @MAli13chineta ... yes i am new at it.. sorry

Answer 13

@MAli13chineta i m not troubling her. I was tagged back and asked a question which i am trying to answer. I am here only to help you guys :)

Answer 14

Thank you :)

Answer 15

ok thank u

Answer 16

aye @Write0The0Right0For0Wrong0Doing great job:) just add music and call it a song haha and you did great i cant believe you can write like this

Answer 17

:) thats what my life did to me..lol

Answer 18

well everything happens for a reason autumn so dont trip

Answer 19

oh ik:)...we can see that;) :*

Answer 20

haha:)

Answer 21

hehe.. lol but i got over 50more to post one day:)

Answer 22

haha ok good lets see emCX

Answer 23

now?

Answer 24

haha when ever lol but u gotta make it a "song" so that its not a poem haha

Answer 25

i dont write song:/

Answer 26

lol no im saying just call it a songXD

Answer 27

lol..oh ok:)