Question

ok everyone heres the song i wrote

Answer 1

IM THE FIRST TO SPEAK YAY

Answer 2

"her smile"

(verse1)

Her smile lights up my world,
I cant stop the thinking about how she smiles when I call her my girl,
So bright,
Lights up the night,
Turns war around,
And stops the fight,
The greatest thing ive ever seen ,
Sheds the light,
The smile so pure that it makes u critical,
Critical to be with me,
Got the grin so high,
Looking like the joker as if im the enemy,
You are very beautiful,
To be happy with you is my one goal,
Got the pic next to my bed,
Wishing that I could look into your eyes with that being enough said,
I just wanna hold you tight,
And keep you for the whole night,
Lay next to you gently stroking your face,
Got me tearing up cuz the love is so strong there is no better place,
Eminem got a song that says till I collapse,
But our love is so stacked,
That itll be till we collapse,
Because there is no I in love,
Its like a drink mixed and now im drunk,
Its hard to face reality,
When the belief has to battle me,
And the craziness has to saddle me,
Get the herd so the farmer can cattle me,

(chorus)

her smile,
her smile is the greatest thing,
her smile makes my mood change,
her smile is perfect,
her smile is worth it,
ohhhh ooo oh oo oh,

(verse2)

Every time that I see her,
My life turns around,
Cuz no other broad matters no matter when they were found,
She has eyes like gold,
Smile warming up my heart as If I were cold,
I guess thats just how it goes,
But baby this is how we go,
Go ahead and make her happy,
Forget the middle where its all sad and sappy,
We entangled in our relationship,
If we were hair wed be nappy,
I wanna marry you,
And carry you in my arms,
Start a family,
Cuz youre my lucky charm,
Your smile is so crazy,
Youre the only thing that can phase me,
But I guess thats just love maybe,
I opened up my heart scared at first,
I was getting prepared for the worst,
Getting ready to bury myself six feet into the dirt,
then you came around,
with that smile turned my world upside down,

(chorus)

her smile,
her smile is the greatest thing,
her smile makes my mood change,
her smile is perfect,
her smile is worth it,
ohhhh ooo oh oo oh,

(verse3)

your making me crazy,
our love phases me,
but then I think just maybe,
maybe we were meant to be,
maybe you were sent me,
I dont know how this could be,
We were supposed to go down into catastrophe,
With miles and piles of blaspheme,
The relationship moving to fast for me,
But then I sit calm,
And I sing you song,
And all falls into place,
For this is true love and yes that is the case,
We were perfect,
We still are perfect,
And thats how itll always be,
I love your smile,
So bright seen from a mile,
Listen and close your eyes,
As I whisper you are my one and only prize,

(chorus)

her smile,
her smile is the greatest thing,
her smile makes my mood change,
her smile is perfect,
her smile is worth it,
ohhhh ooo oh oo oh,

Answer 3

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Answer 4

I'm here cx

Answer 5

its amazing

Answer 6

YAAAY AWESOME

Answer 7

Im the first to medal AWWW YA

Answer 8

haha thats why i tagged yoUXD

Answer 9

Before this game i was so far low
When my stars didn't glow
And my heart didn't show..
But now I think it's time you know
That my lines I wrote
Were designed new flows..
It was my idea
To get my mind clearer
So I'd write rhymes purer..
I was thinkin that I'd get near her
Guess I didn't hear her
When she cried that tear..
When i was focused on rap
Our relationship backed
And the thing split in half..
I know that things neva last
But I prayed and gasped
Tryna contain my grasp..
Now its all down the drain
Hear her callin my name
But it's all in my brain
I take all of the blame
I make all of the same
Mistakes all of you made
But I'm stallin today..
I may stick with this
But I'm sick of listening
To the **** you give me..
Baby please forgive me
I respect you plenty
But there is no envy..
I gave you all i had
But i recall you mad
Prayin to god I'd smash..
Into the wall of glass
Hopin I'd fall to ash
And then you paused and laughed..
I knew at that exact moment
You attacked that emotion
Laid me flat in the ocean..
I was sad but devoted
To get back in the open
Not sit back and unspoken..
And thats when i knew
That your *** wasn't true
And you lacked comin through
I sat back to exclude
All the things me and you
Used to do, Im a fool
For not graspin a clue..

Chorus:
Things change..
People seperate..
Fame desinigrates..
Love turns into hate..
Too much and too late..
Enough is at stake..
What's it gonna take..
For us to be the same..
Things change..
People seperate..
Fame desinigrates..
Love turns into hate..
Too much and too late..
Enough is at stake..
What's it gonna take..
For us to be the same..

Verse 2:
I remember a time
Us together in prime
You were better then rhymes..
Now your a feather that flies
Tied together with lies
Just a cleaver disguise..
You spoke to my heart
Neva showed me the part
When it glowed in the dark..
Neva lightin a spark
Just egniitin the dart
Threw it right from the start..
I shoulda neva let you in
I'm regrettin every minute
Together that we spent..
I'ma forget you as a friend
Every word that you said
Won't be heard ever again..
I'm tired of the lies
I inspired you to try
But you fired from inside
I know i heard when i cried
I'm retired from your side
I've expired from ya life
No more tryin to decide..
I'm gettin lost in this rap
I was tossed to the back
Like a wasp in a pack..
And the cost of all that
Was like jaws on attack
After haulin ya trash..
I'm paved down in the dumps
Layed down in the slumps
Caved down in the bumps..
I need to break out and get up
Faced down and im stuck
Caged out and im ******..
I pray it's a dream
But as lame as it seems
I'm arranged to be seen..
Can't escape from these beems
Cause if i save you and me
You will change and you'll leave..
And i know it will happen
Cause if i show that I'm slackin
You will just go and start laughin
Before ya know i start tappin
Because your dozed and relaxin
You wake up froze and start spazzin
And your life goes with eyes flashin

Chorus:
Things change..
People seperate..
Fame desinigrates..
Love turns into hate..
Too much and too late..
Enough is at stake..
What's it gonna take..
For us to be the same..
Things change..
People seperate..
Fame desinigrates..
Love turns into hate..
Too much and too late..
Enough is at stake..
What's it gonna take..
For us to be the same..

Answer 10

@5SOSISLIFE

Answer 11

This is my rap

Answer 12

thank you guys:)

Answer 13

I love it lol

Answer 14

wow :o

Answer 15

haha thank you:)

Answer 16

i dont

Answer 17

nice, I love it

Answer 18

@Mesopretty i dont mind that you put a song but id prefer that you ask first thank you but it was good:)

Answer 19

19 people in here!!!

Answer 20

Great job, guys...I don't think I've ever seen so many people looking at the same question at 1 time

Answer 21

who @hotdancingbabe14 ?

Answer 22

excellent!

Answer 23

hahaCX it all started like 30 mins ago in the other question @k_lynn

Answer 24

romnya

Answer 25

That issss.... Amazing! :P

Answer 26

thank you:)

Answer 27

What is so mean

Answer 28

I gave you a medal for a reason, you didn't have to tag me lmao Cx but yah I liked it.!!!! C:

Answer 29

my day one is in here @Clalgee

Answer 30

haha i tagged you because you got this started:)

Answer 31

i was talking to i dont like cx

Answer 32

haha thank you

Answer 33

@hotdancingbabe14 not everyone has to like the same music. You shouldn't go around calling people that.

Answer 34

not the songs i did like the song

Answer 35

haha guys its ok and thank you @hotdancingbabe14 for sticking up for me:)

Answer 36

Just because I like the music doesn't mean Joe Shmoe down the street has to

Answer 37

no no no no arguing on my post

Answer 38

we are happy people here

Answer 39

I'm not trying to argue...I'm just trying to state a point

Answer 40

@k_lynn it was a misunderstanding I apologized so stop

Answer 41

i love all songs

Answer 42

sooooo.... the song any feedback?

Answer 43

I didn't see the apology so I'm sorry I keep dwelling on the subject

Answer 44

I love your song @LyricalDevonne

Answer 45

@k_lynn I sent her a pm

Answer 46

ik @Clalgee has sum shes been replying for like 12 minutesCX

Answer 47

I am srry for putting my rap up their

Answer 48

thank you @Mesopretty

Answer 49

oh, well ok see ya

Answer 50

no its fine just try to ask first thats all so that people arent going crazy

Answer 51

*claps* you did amazing!! cx =^..^=

Answer 52

help me with my question

Answer 53

haha you guys are so nice:) and @Clalgee is still replyingCX omg shes takess soooo long

Answer 54

so many people omg

Answer 55

haha this is only 14 it was 21

Answer 56

I think the most I've had on a question has been 5 lol

Answer 57

Wow... @LyricalDevonne I'm really speechless.. This is one beautiful song and I'm guessing you wrote your heart out :) Sounds like whomever she is, she has a perfect smile. I'm really not sure what else to say other than this song is perfect. It really moved me :) And really... I'm just trying to figure how to write how I feel about this song.. I'm sorry I'm taking so long, I was just reading the song over and over XD

Answer 58

CX haha i had 34 on my last one thats why i was disappointed i only got 20 medals

Answer 59

haha aw

Answer 60

lol she says shes speechless and writes a paragraph see this is why your awesome @Clalgee cant wait to see you!!!

Answer 61

can you join fan please i have 6 fans

Answer 62

Wait.... What you mean by day one??

Answer 63

these are really great

Answer 64

haha i only have 68CX

Answer 65

please

Answer 66

like your my main person like my best friend

Answer 67

did anyone notice that at the very top of the screen there was an ad for a lady humping a yoga mat? XD XD

Answer 68

thnx lyrical

Answer 69

thank you @kittycat123

Answer 70

really?CX

Answer 71

lol

Answer 72

@morganchavez

Answer 73

i still need fans help help

Answer 74

yes really it was so gross she was old and like 400 pounds XD

Answer 75

haha all my songs are secret who they are written for except the person who its for

Answer 76

I really wanna know who its for now lol

Answer 77

lolCX wtf i done

Answer 78

That was a really amazing song @LyricalDevonne !

Answer 79

thank you @PookieBear555 ohhhh imma love saying that nameCX poookkiiieeee

Answer 80

Lolz haha XD

Answer 81

that used to be my uncles nick name

Answer 82

haha

Answer 83

Hey Pookiebear

Answer 84

ohhhh pookie is my 70th fannnn!!!!

Answer 85

Hey @Mesopretty And yay haha @LyricalDevonne

Answer 86

ok I dont understand...you write amazing music and I am just a regular girl and you dont have more fans than me........people fan this dude! like seriously he should have thousands of fans

Answer 87

haha i love everyone i have 15 medals in less than 30 minutes

Answer 88

Lol well you deserve it!!

Answer 89

haha its fine i do it for the love of the music and im not the best looking dude out there im not the best at wrting music i just do it for fun and for anyone who is willing to listen