does this story sound good

My hero is my family and friends. Sitting here up and wide awake at 3am as my life has been through some ups and downs lately. Crazy ups and downs and I am surprised I have even been able to function lately. My brain has been overloaded with emotions with my personal life, my mother who was just out of the hospital for having a baby, giving it that I always have to take care of the kids and the baby it always ended up emotionally draining me and stressing me out some times when I have a bad day. My best friend always looks out for me and another special friend who

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does this story sound good

My hero is my family and friends. Sitting here up and wide awake at 3am as my life has been through some ups and downs lately. Crazy ups and downs and I am surprised I have even been able to function lately. My brain has been overloaded with emotions with my personal life, my mother who was just out of the hospital for having a baby, giving it that I always have to take care of the kids and the baby it always ended up emotionally draining me and stressing me out some times when I have a bad day. My best friend always looks out for me and another special friend who

anonymous · Answer

yes it sounds great

anonymous · Answer

but maybe you might want to use and a little less