Question

here guys a part of a song
" The Life I Live"
The life i live is hard.
I just suffered through it all.
I live in a thousand shadows.
And they put words in my mouth.
Mom,Dad and even friends.
I try to say what I want but i cant.
The life i live is killing my spirit.
It is killing my voice.
It has slowed my heart down.
The melody is off beat.
The life I live is not my life at all.
Its everyone else life through my shoes.
The life i live is gone.

Answer 1

@LyricalDevonne @dan815 @MAli13chineta @michaelfuller2016 @WhisperZ

Answer 2

"Who Am I"
I dont know who I am.
Who is living through me now.
Why cant they just stop.
The hatred they hold.
The regret they have.
Is that someone else or just me.
The confusion I hold hurts.
I am running through my thoughts.
And asking is this me.
Is this who i have become.
A depressed and scared little girl.
Can i fix it?
Can I get out?
The darkness is holding me back.
The waves are pushing me down.
The life I am in is not who i am.
I ask now who is the girl living this life.
Trying to stand strong but not doing to well.
Trying to get through a life of control.
Its all she knows to do.
Now who am i?
I am the spirit in that girl.
I want out and free.
No control.
No voices.
No judgement.
Just me.
I am the spirit of a lost broken soul.

Answer 3

its good!

Answer 4

Wow that is beautiful. :O

Answer 5

thanks guys

Answer 6

Very good rap:)

Answer 7

Its extraordinary

Answer 8

lol.. u guys r awesome... thanks:)

Answer 9

"Has the dreams stopped"
Has my dreams stopped about you?
Have I forgotten you for good?
Can I remember you?
Do I even know you?
Who are you to me?
You fade in and out of my thoughts.
You are disappearing.
I cant remember.
I have forgotten.
My dreams have stopped.
Stay away.
Your not my dad.
Your nothing.
You left me along time ago.
Has my dreams stopped about you?

"When I look at you"
When I look at you its different every time.
I see a lie one time.
Then I see the truth the next.
What is it now when I look?
Will I see you or someone else?
Are you heaven or hell?
Are you an angel or a devil?
When I look at you.

"Will you miss me?"
Will you miss me when I am gone out of your life.
Will you miss me when you go back home and dont come back.
Hun can I believe that you will miss me or
Can I not and think you will forget me.
My love will you say to me you will miss me
Or keep it to yourself.
Will you miss me?

Answer 10

@LyricalDevonne .....here:)

Answer 11

CX

Answer 12

lol.. no:P

Answer 13

haha they were goodCX

Answer 14

thanks... dik if i am going to put anymore

Answer 15

haha why not?

Answer 16

bc.. lol idk if they r good enough:P

Answer 17

haha they are seriously

Answer 18

lol.. i dont know u might think so but not everyone will think tht

Answer 19

haha you have 3 published girl what are you talking about

Answer 20

lol.. thats those what about ones that i never showed anyone..lol

Answer 21

haha im sure their just as good the same person wrote em

Answer 22

lol ur just to sweet:)

Answer 23

lol..:)