Question

CAN SOMEONE HELP ME FOR A MEDAL AND TO BE FANNED!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

Read each paragraph below and add transitions where needed. You may change the paragraph in any way you feel necessary, including removing sentences that do not fit with the rest of the topic.


One final effect of radio and TV on the language must be noted. There is no doubt that these great media of information have cut down considerably the time that used to be devoted to reading. Radio and TV may enhance the spoken word. They tend to lower comprehension levels.



It all happened late one night after the family had gone to bed. Jack was lying in bed when he remembered he had left the groceries on the back seat of the car. In the paper bag was a carton of ice cream that would melt during the warm summer night. He put it in the refrigerator.

Doctor Henderson was a kind and gentle man. His patients loved and respected him. His death made many of them sad. As a young man, he decided to become a doctor and pursue a life of healing and comforting. His life will long be remembered by the citizens of Battle Creek, Michigan.

Regular car maintenance is important. For example, my car severely overheated last week. No doubt, a yearly radiator flush would have prevented this. My car is 15 years old, and I should buy a new one.

Answer 2

@lizzyrockefeller @invinceble

Answer 3

1) on the radio and on on the tv.

Answer 4

What

Answer 5

i think u should remove the last sentence in the last paragraph and for the 1st paragraph add one final effect on the radio and also on the t.v that the language must me noted.

Answer 6

i agree with lizzy

Answer 7

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Answer 8

THANKZ GUYS!!!!!!

Answer 9

Your welcome

Answer 10

BUT WHAT ABOUT TRANSITIONS

Answer 11

imma gettin there was tryin to do that first

Answer 12

the second paragraph should say It all happened late one night after the family had gone to bed. Jack was lying in bed when he remembered he had left the groceries on the back seat of the car. which has caused the carton of ice cream in the bag to melt during the warm summer night. then jack put it in the refrigerator. i personally think u should put freezer instead of fridge

Answer 13

Doctor Henderson was a kind and gentle man. His patients loved and respected him. His As for his death the people became sad. When Henderson was a young boy , he decided to become a doctor and pursue a life of healing and comforting. His life will long be remembered by the citizens of Battle Creek, Michigan.

Answer 14

Regular car maintenance is very important. For example, my car had severely overheated last week. None the less, a yearly radiator flush would have prevented this. Inspite of this my car is 15 years old, providing that i would greatly buy a new car so the overheating doesn't happen again

Answer 15

@stellawalkerson @invinceble

Answer 16

what abt the 1st paragraph

Answer 17

Your doing GREAT btw!!!!!

Answer 18

Why did you change it to "None the less"

Answer 19

One final effect of radio and TV on the language must be noted. To start with there is no doubt that these great media of information have cut down considerably the time that used to be devoted to reading. Radio and TV may enhance the spoken word. As a result the t.v and Radio tend to lower the comprehension levels. and because that makes more and mature since than what it said before

Answer 20

@invinceble @stellawalkerson

Answer 21

Okay so now how do take out the extra or the unneeded infos or add more infos. Or did you already do that

Answer 22

i already did that

Answer 23

Your awesome THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!

Answer 24

No problem thats what im good at is helping people

Answer 25

if u need anymore help tag me

Answer 26

has either one of you guys read the story The Prisoner Who Wore Glasses