Question

HELP QUICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

i am doing an essay on Michael browns case, and i am doing a paragraph about being prejudice and how it plays a part in what happened, but i don't know how i should start the paragraph

Answer 2

plz help me guys it is due soon and this is the last part i have to do

Answer 3

@Data_LG2 @Mimi_x3 @TheSmartOne @camerondoherty @Secret-Ninja @Joel_the_boss @linn99123 @LeeEtchison @just_one_last_goodbye

Answer 4

What side are you on?

Answer 5

ummm the side where i believe that darren had the right to shoot michael brown

Answer 6

@bazel_e @spidermanis

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i dont want to start with a question

Answer 8

start with a statement fact and opinion

Answer 9

Umm. then with like a fact. Trais Brown was shot by on blah blah ( I don't know the details).
This incident caused a outrage in the city of

Answer 10

Mayn people protestd and there was a lot of violence.

Answer 11

well say one reason why offifer Wilson shot micheal brown because he was robbing a liquor store also they called 911 they were trying to calm mr brown down and he wont lisen also he tried to take mr Wilson the offer gun and he shoot mr micheal brown like 5 times. there is that a better explain..

Answer 12

^ well that would sound biased

Answer 13

We should have an unbiased plot in it...

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yes ik @bazel_e i just dont know what to say and @TheSmartOne i included this at the beggining i want somthing saying how they were prejudice @spidermanis the officer didnt know about the robbery the officer stopped the from j-walking

Answer 15

well is my story good did I help u I want a medal pls.. :)

Answer 16

Medals are not everything.

Answer 17

lol I said Travis Brown.. Fail

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idk @spidermanis i want a sentance about prejudice and how the black were being prejudice and @TheSmartOne haha

Answer 19

Have you started it?

I would suggest that you should start your paragraph with a general idea of what is prejudice, then tell something about the article and how it is connected to prejudice.. after that introduce your own idea about it. I'm not sure what the article is about so i cannot help with the actual writing.

Answer 20

u

Answer 21

there it is @Data_LG2 and thatnks, if you have a possible sentance that would be awesome!!

Answer 22

give me 30 minutes or an hour, i'll try to fix it

but try to think of more ideas.
start with what is prejudice? what does it do?
what is prejudice about the article?

Answer 23

ok thanks you sooo much it is due by midnight tonight so i have time!! :)

Answer 24

I just read what you wrote,

what type of essay are you writing? formal essay or informal essay?
also, i'm kinda confused about your idea and your arguments because your arguments are not clearly supporting your opinion.

Answer 25

I sent you a link for my google drive.. check the changes I'm doing...

Answer 26

i am writing a persuasive essay

Answer 27

i had to send you a request to view what you edited

Answer 28

i guess you can close this now :D