Question

I'm really bad at punctuation so can you read this over and correct it if it needs correcting? it will be in the comments.

Answer 1

"Kenzie let's go play outside" i heard my little sister yell from outside my bedroom door " Emily I don't want to go outside in the snow storm" I replied turning my music up loudly ignoring her banging on my door, she came in and turned my music down "Dad said you had to take me outside so ha" she said sticking her tongue out at me, I rolled my eyes at my little sister and got up to get in my snow stuff "Get out and go get ready then" she did what I said and ran to her room quickly. I hurried up and got dressed "I'll meet you downstairs" I said peeking in Emily's room. When I went downstairs my dad was on the couch, he looked back at me “What are you doing honey?” I sighed “Emily said that you said I had to take her outside” he started laughing and I knew he never said that. I saw him wink and I knew Emily was beside me, we went outside and I didn’t know what to do “Kenzie let’s build a snowman” I shrugged my shoulders and helped 5 minutes later I found myself having so much fun, 5 minutes turned to 2 hours and I didn’t even know it. “Time to come in you’ve been out for 3 hours and you need something to eat and some hot chocolate” my mom yelled out we groaned and went in anyway my mom made us big cups of hot chocolate and some dinner and we had three plates of dinner I guess playing in the snow is tiring “Kenzie can we go out tomorrow” I smiled and nodded and headed up to bed.

Answer 2

I dont know why its like that..